Firefly (did you hear it?)

I like it's soo pretty!

Quick, to the point, perfect!

amazing(; deffinitly tagged as a favorite

Oh my gosh, you described the exact feelings and experience I have whenever I have an idea at this blinking moment and then it escapes me! Frustrating, isn't it?

I love pieces like this that use little linguistic flourishes without resorting to distorting the meaning of the piece to do so.  I'm quite impressed by your ability to include things like rough rhyme, rhythm, euphony, consonance, et cetera without stretching for words that fit.  It feels like it came very natural, and that's good.

Love this poem. speaks to people in many different ways.

I agree with Anonymous... very nice, love it.

very lovely

Wow. I could never write something so powerful with only 27 words.

Simple, clean, and straightfoward. Oustanding writing using simplicity