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Sudden Death

November 21, 2016
By Amaterasuswag23 BRONZE, Gilmanton, New Hampshire
Amaterasuswag23 BRONZE, Gilmanton, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"This world is full of things that don't go as you wish. ... As long as the concept of winners exist, there must also be losers. The selfish desire of wanting to maintain peace causes wars and hatred is born to protect love."
(Madara Uchiha)


I never expected
for you to cause such deep wounds.
My mind in shock by sudden
snake-like movements as you strike.
My body scarred by your harsh
movements.
Blood cascading down my side.

Golden eyes stare into glaring green.
Mine wide with shock, and yours
calculating and calm.

I won't let myself lose, I can’t.
Wrapping my hand around
a hardwood handle of a jagged (serrated) blade,
I twist my body away from you
and in my panic,
I strike.

We begin tumbling to the ground,
and in an instant I’m striking again.
When we hit the ground there is silence,
time has frozen and we pause
to catch our breath.

Letting go of cold steel,
hearing it clatter to the ground.
I watch you struggle, gasping for a breath
you can’t receive.
Your once-green eyes turn swampy as you
fade into nonexistence,
and for some reason I feel no remorse.


The author's comments:

I had honestly been watching NCIS and while watching I had thought of how a specific death had occured based on situations in the show and thus, I came up with this.


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