November 6, 2016
By Sarahmael8 GOLD, Germantown, Wisconsin
Sarahmael8 GOLD, Germantown, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Focus on trying to remember moments
not so much what was happening but how you felt.

i miss a place i once visited
surrounded by new sensory of
mountains and small towns
ponds and long roads
I miss the feeling of peace
and a calm life that I dream of
the simpleness
the quietness
the slowness of the wind and
the people
I remember being held
held by strangers that
said they loved me
me a child
who is now holding back tears
I miss a place of peacefulness a
place where I felt so loved
by people that are not my real family
i can not tell you if i have felt that way
with my own family
i can blame others for my sadness
but it's all me
maybe it's all in my head
but being surrounded by so much
made me happy
but then i was back to being sad.
so take me back

The author's comments:

I wrote this about a vacation I took with my best friend at the time. I was so happy there, surrouned by new things and people that seemed to love me so much. I miss this place more than anything and my best friend....

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