Dancing on Daddy's Toes MAG

March 9, 2009
By meaghan demallie SILVER, Jamison, Pennsylvania
meaghan demallie SILVER, Jamison, Pennsylvania
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Dancing on Daddy’s toes.
light feet with no miseries
except those little enough to be fixed
with a band aid.

Independence arises.
dancing on your own two feet
louder, softer, differing continuously
but you.

Until you become they
a twosome, a pair,
a partner dance
flittering delicately around each other

soon your toes become crushed
by light angel feet
running around frantically,
as you administer the band aid with a kiss.

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jazzy16 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 9:44 pm
jazzy16 BRONZE, Germantown, Maryland
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ooo! i LOVE this poem! definitly adding it to my favorites. keep up the awesome work!!!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 3:33 pm
flyingpinkgiraffes PLATINUM, Chardon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"When in doubt, kill your main character." ~Me
"Worry is like a rocking chair. It will give you something to do, but it won't get you anywhere."

aw this is so sweet


on Oct. 11 2009 at 9:13 pm
meaghan demallie SILVER, Jamison, Pennsylvania
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thanks so much!

uglybeauty94 said...
on Aug. 4 2009 at 2:34 am
i love this. it is beautiful

on Jul. 9 2009 at 3:24 am
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

This makes me think of my daddy and how much he means to me. Great job, please, do keep writing!

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