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you lied

October 2, 2016
By wolfvomit PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
wolfvomit PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“don’t fall slave to the serpent’s tongue”

you told me that you'd be there 


you told me you'd be on time


'i'll be right here waiting'


you promised to be with me


you promised,


and you lied.

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Cam_is_Away said...
on Jan. 29 2017 at 6:44 pm
Cam_is_Away, Non, California
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Ah God. I wish I could explain in just a few words, but I've been the one who has broken that promise way too many times, and the guilt eats me alive. This is so touching and intense to read. Maybe it's just me. One thing though, that I've noticed throughout all your writing, is that your writing inspires true and raw feelings and emotions. That's amazing. That's incredible. That's so rare.