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Where there darkness there light

Sorry dont cut it i've heard my whole life

Let it be heard the darkness will fade

When the light comes there will only be shade

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Xyphoria said...
Oct. 4 at 10:49 pm
the first sentence makes no sense,instead I believe you should change it to "When there's darkness, there's light." It's not a bad or a good poem. It needs work, in my opinion it's too short but that's just me. you need periods because these sentences don't go together. I hope this helps.
IWasJusTrynaSwim said...
Oct. 4 at 2:17 pm
@Sheyenne I want a bag of chips
BlueOwl replied...
Oct. 4 at 3:48 pm
Me too and maybe a sandwich too and love the poem
IWasJusTrynaSwim replied...
today at 1:48 pm
deer like poetry too
HartTaylor said...
Oct. 4 at 10:20 am
This is SO good!
Sheyenne replied...
Oct. 4 at 12:50 pm
@HartTaylor Thanks girl!!
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