Dark days

September 28, 2016
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Where there darkness there light

Sorry dont cut it i've heard my whole life

Let it be heard the darkness will fade

When the light comes there will only be shade

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Xyphoria said...
Oct. 4, 2016 at 10:49 pm
the first sentence makes no sense,instead I believe you should change it to "When there's darkness, there's light." It's not a bad or a good poem. It needs work, in my opinion it's too short but that's just me. you need periods because these sentences don't go together. I hope this helps.
IWasJusTrynaSwim said...
Oct. 4, 2016 at 2:17 pm
@Sheyenne I want a bag of chips
BlueOwl replied...
Oct. 4, 2016 at 3:48 pm
Me too and maybe a sandwich too and love the poem
IWasJusTrynaSwim replied...
Oct. 6, 2016 at 1:48 pm
deer like poetry too
HartTaylor said...
Oct. 4, 2016 at 10:20 am
This is SO good!
Sheyenne replied...
Oct. 4, 2016 at 12:50 pm
@HartTaylor Thanks girl!!
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