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Choking on Greed

September 18, 2016
By SaraiSmartCookie BRONZE, Morgantown, West Virginia
SaraiSmartCookie BRONZE, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Exposed to the tainted air
Makes lungs burn like coal
An earnest warning to beware
Infection of a blackened soul

 

Forgot caveats and breathed deeper
Choke on grey cloud symphony
Be cautious of Grim Reaper
Holds scythe but no sympathy

 

Feel good for a while
Inhale mere delusion of success
Still crack a crooked smile
Until the absence causes distress

 

When heart starts beating faster
Figure something is incredibly wrong
At sight of the predator
Can’t go without very long

 

It will boil the blood
Don’t claim it’s an art
Melts the mind to mud
And it hardens the heart


Cough up all the money
It hurts but won’t quit
Until all pockets are heavy
Who knew paper was toxic?

 

Gold gravestone with silver dove
And carved line to read
Dedicated in the memory of
Victim who choked on greed


The author's comments:

This piece is a comparison between the effects of smoking and effects of being greedy with money. Secondhand smoke kills the smoker's surrounding victims, but refusal to help the poor also contributes to the demise of others. Which is worse? If both affect our and others' physical and mental wellbeing in a negative way, is either really worse than the other?


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