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You still wear that old war paint
(angry lines slashed above your eyes)
I can feel you waiting for the battle to come
(spikes of red staining your cheeks)
There are no pawing horses now
No painted hands on their haunches
(the number of warrior souls you stole)
No noonday sun beating on bare backs
No smell of sweat and leather and bravery
Puncturing the familiar woodsmoke
(breastplates of porcupine quills, feathers in hair)
No ululations of war, yelling at fear
No singing, no dancing, no tribes, no homes
(scars left from the struggle free from the sun)
Just a drum drum drum beat
(a piece of flesh left for the Great Spirit)
Piercing through dreams.

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Jakethesnake said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 1:50 pm
This is great! Although I do not know why they called it a ''battle." It was a massacre of unarmed women and children, old and young. We simply hated the Native Americans that much.
 
zhlenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 8:13 pm

this is really good 

If u hav time can u chk out my wrk

 
xXvannieXx said...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 2:43 pm
I loved it! the imagary was very good
 
MandaPerkins This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 21, 2010 at 5:02 pm
I like the imagery! I find the style of this quite unique. In other words, I love it. :)
 
NaTivE_BeAutiE This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 30, 2010 at 9:41 pm
oops! wow it posted twice
 
NaTivE_BeAutiE This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 30, 2010 at 9:40 pm

Nice piece, you're a very talented writer. The imagery was unique and easy to follow. Yet the style and   flow were so complex! Don't let those jealous folks comments pull you down, ;) 

Also, thank you for sharing the harsh yet true time of violation and slaughter of so many innocent men, and mostly women and children.

Many people still think Indian and think: Halloween costume or fictional movie character. But we're still here, still strong, still proud.

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jazzy16 replied...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 2:50 pm
 definitly agree. most people write about love or death or school but this poem is different and a nice change-up with important references. keep on writing!
 
BrokenInnocence said...
Oct. 30, 2010 at 7:47 pm
It's lovely. I love how you mad it deep and part of the culture of that time with so little words, yet you gave it so much meaning.
 
marioc said...
Oct. 30, 2010 at 12:40 pm
dude that was really good man, really enjoyed it.
 
teenagemutantme said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 6:36 pm
It's okay:)
 
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Nov. 21, 2010 at 9:51 am
r u kidding me teenagemutantme its soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... (more »)
 
IamtheStargirl said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 5:03 pm

Chilling, heartbreaking, beautiful!!!!!! Thank you sosososososossoso much for writing and posting this!

Congratulations on getting it published :D

 
PieceOfMyHeart said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 1:46 pm
One word: Powerful
 
Sam-E. said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 6:13 pm
It's beautiful , yet powerful. It's not enourmous, yet meaningful. This poem is apart of history, and apart of history means that something is forever! . Good Job =] !
 
Edgar said...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 1:12 pm
If I were to stand on that battlefield I would have known you wrote it write. Amazing.
 
Lucy(: This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 12:13 pm

so moving and eye-catching

each word is like a metphore but it makes so much sense

unbelieveable (:

check out my work toooo

 
Dawnheart said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 7:40 pm
Very, very good. I love the last line!
 
gutairgirl said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:59 pm
wow!       
 
dojorockergirl said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:04 pm
this is amazing! i love it!
 
DeadPeopleKinndaGrl said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 11:42 am
This is reallt cool and great. Everyone plzzzzzz commment and rate my fiction articles, it means a lot to me.
 
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