~I wouldn't~

August 23, 2016

I wouldn’t miss the feel of his hand in mine.
I wouldn’t miss the feel of his arms wrapped around me.
I wouldn’t miss the feel of his lips pressed against mine.
I wouldn’t miss the feel of being so close to him.
I wouldn’t miss him.
If I didn’t care.

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pineappler03This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 19, 2016 at 8:38 pm
This has a very deep meaning because it almost as if the speaker is conflicted. For example she says she won't remember all this stuff being with her lover down to his kiss yet, it's almost like they lists of each detail like the speaker is telling themself they didn't care, but apart of them does. Even if it wasn't the theme you were trying to display I still think it's really cool because you can look at it, so many ways. Amazing job! I'm totally impressed :)
Reni.Fowler33 replied...
Feb. 25 at 12:58 pm
Awe! Thanks!!
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