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_Nice

August 22, 2016
By Phoebe98 BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
Phoebe98 BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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The night was
full.

  Joy, calm, celebration.

Heard  mumbling
             murmuring
             odd?

Tons lurching
  forward
       speeding
               shrieks
         scarred

           bodies.
He ran.


The night was
shattered.
 
  Chaos. Anger. Grief.


The author's comments:

I wanted to play with opposites -- how something can seem one way and quickly change to its opposite.  And I wanted to play around with the spacing of words to emphasize the point.


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