Victims of the Night

We are vigilantes in the day.

In the daytime we are emperors,

Bold, victorious, golden.

We are the stalwart allies,

We make you smile and stand with you even if your life is in crisis.


But when the light switches off and we are blanketed underneath the cloak of darkness, our smiles fade.


We are thieves of the darkness, robbers of justice.

We are the tormented pariahs of Eternity.

We are victims of the night. 

This is the reality we are forced to live in.

We never had a choice.

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L.E.D said...
Apr. 18 at 12:01 am
@MysteriousErudite I really like it. The contrasting is fascinating. Check out some of my stuff too!
BlondieArtsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 11, 2016 at 6:01 pm
Spectacular! I can see that you understand. "We never had a choice."
gummybears said...
Aug. 15, 2016 at 2:50 pm
I hope this makes it in the magazine
loverofbooks said...
Aug. 15, 2016 at 2:44 pm
It describes me perfectly
rachelsneighbor said...
Aug. 15, 2016 at 2:43 pm
Wonderful writing style - dark, mysterious, fluid. I can almost hear you :)
Mister said...
Aug. 15, 2016 at 2:41 pm
It has such powerful word choice - a short poem but every word has such intense meaning. You use such a interesting writing technique!
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