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Death By Bedsheets

August 4, 2016
By Charissa BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
Charissa BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love thee, I love thee with a love that shall not die. Till the sun grows cold and the stars grow old." - William Shakespeare


The antidote isn't 

Sweet compared to 

The poison, But 

It's deadlier,

Your lips are smothered 

In the flavors sweetest

To me,

But you feed them 

To someone else,

She is to be

The worshipped play

Thing 

For a night,

But when the sun shines

Again

Revealing 

The exposed bodies 

And twisted pleasures,

You toss her away,

With a peice of you,

Too bad I can smell

Her on your collarbone,

I see her finger prints

On your ribs

She has carved a

Road map to her 

Place on your back

With her nails,

Something you're proud 

Of, I'm sure

Little does she kow,

You love the art not

The artist and you'll 

Never come,

You got what you 

wanted,

I hope when you notice

Her waitng by 

The phone for a call 

That won't come

You'll see,

I hope when you notice 

The bed you two played on

Covered with tear drops

you'll see,

That where there's 

Smoke there's fire,

To kill is to 

Die yourself



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on Aug. 7 2016 at 2:55 pm
Charissa BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love thee, I love thee with a love that shall not die. Till the sun grows cold and the stars grow old." - William Shakespeare

Thank you! I love hearing feedback on my work! I'm so glad you enjoyed it

on Aug. 7 2016 at 2:53 pm
Charissa BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love thee, I love thee with a love that shall not die. Till the sun grows cold and the stars grow old." - William Shakespeare

Thank you so much! @pineappler03

on Aug. 7 2016 at 2:24 pm
pineappler03 SILVER, Waterford, Connecticut
6 articles 1 photo 61 comments
This is really good. The line breaks made the piece more dramatic, making it worth reading.

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on Aug. 7 2016 at 11:27 am
Yoela PLATINUM, Seattle, Washington
27 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My powers stretch over the horizon and work even when my eyes are closed"

Wow. This is stunning. I love your use of line breaks and the overwhelming passion coating this piece. You created a really beautiful piece.