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Heartbreak

July 10, 2016
By JamieNease BRONZE, South Lebanon, Ohio
JamieNease BRONZE, South Lebanon, Ohio
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You used to talk all the time,

then one day you turned into a mime.

He broke you into so many parts,

as if he never cared about your heart.

But still you wish upon the moon,

hoping that he might come back soon.

Young girl i can promise you that,

never again will he suck the life out of you like a bat.

Just be cautious the next time around,

for pain once lost can always be found.

So in the future if a boy looks at you and drools,

make sure that he treats you like a jewel.


The author's comments:

Last year i got my heart broken for the first time and it was honestly the worst pain that i've ever felt, and what i'm hoping that people will take away from this is that if you get your heart broken it's going to hurt a lot at first but that just means that it wasn't meant to be. Then after you've healed from it just wait and be patient and someone will come into your life that makes you happy again.


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on Jul. 16 2016 at 10:23 pm
JamieNease BRONZE, South Lebanon, Ohio
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Thank you @KMG28

KMG28 SILVER said...
on Jul. 16 2016 at 12:47 am
KMG28 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than I

This poem has a nice rhythm, great advice, and wonderful descriptive language. :)