You're an ocean, My Love

Do i even mean anything to you?
You dont seem to care when im down and blue
But im always right there by your side
If love is an ocean, you are the tide
The tide that pulling me under
While the skies are all lightning and thunder
At least i cant see it, nor can i hear
Because i cant hear anything over waves and the fear
You think your saving me from the terror on land
But little do you know i only feel safe on the sand
For i cant swim, and youve know for long time
Oh wait- you dont care enough to keep that on your mind
Or to keep anything about me in your head
When it comes to loving you
Im better off dead.






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TheMuseEuterpe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 16, 2016 at 2:00 pm
I really like this poem, but there are a few grammatical mistakes. Other than that, great job!
 
ambivalentThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2016 at 5:48 pm
love the imagery! found the poem flowed easier with the shorter lines rather than the ones with 14+ syllables.
 
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