Pepto Bismol MAG

February 18, 2009
By Deecc BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
Deecc BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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You say my hair looks like a mane.
I disagree.
Manes belong on lions and I am no animal.

Except for the occasional times when I bare my teeth in anger.
But there’s a part of my animal brain that is still in love with you.

Why?
You only cause me pain, discomfort, and nausea.

The same symptoms cured by a Pepto Bismol tablet.
Next time I see you I’ll make sure to take a couple …



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blwblw1 SILVER said...
on Aug. 14 2012 at 8:05 pm
blwblw1 SILVER, Lancaster County, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Reading takes you into a world far beyond your eyes can see.
and
L'amor Che More il Sole e L'altre Stelle

I can relate to this PERFECTLY. Great job :)

on Nov. 2 2011 at 12:41 pm
purplebutterfly SILVER, Sweet Home, Oregon
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*will instead of with

on Nov. 2 2011 at 12:40 pm
purplebutterfly SILVER, Sweet Home, Oregon
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this poem was a good one...I think that we all have those days and we all with have those days no matter what goes on in life...

on Oct. 18 2011 at 12:55 pm
whitetiger303 PLATINUM, Elmira, New York
25 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing last forever"

Wow so true. I have that problem right now. I keep thinking of my ex amanda. But I'm not that way anymore. I turned my life over to God.

on Oct. 11 2011 at 9:58 pm
SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
30 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream a better dream

ooooh, i really love this piece. one of my favorite ones ive read all day. check my stuff out if you want.

on Sep. 19 2011 at 3:05 pm
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

i like it!! check my poems out please?

l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 12:05 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

Nice Job with this i really like it

My stuff doesnt compare but please check it out

 


ashley blake said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 11:21 am

This is such a cute peice!!!!I love it so much!!! It was sooo sweet.... what ever you do don't stop writing!!!

 


on Feb. 11 2011 at 12:48 pm
meganrenee- GOLD, Harbor Beach, Michigan
13 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself;
nothing more,
nothing less.

i loved this, and i can most definitely relate to this for certain people that i know, lol :P

on Dec. 29 2010 at 7:31 pm
KandyKrysten SILVER, St.Helens, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"God never opens one door without closing another, even if its hell in the hallway..." -unknown
"Cry when you need to, write when the tears don't fall..." -me
"If you know what you care about then you know why you havent given up" -me

this is amazing and completely perfect :)

on Oct. 24 2010 at 7:36 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

i love love love this!

on Aug. 16 2010 at 6:55 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

being a leo, i gotta love the mane! this piece sounds almost like you could use it in a conversation... course mine might be different compared to others.... read some of mine?

on Aug. 8 2010 at 10:17 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
37 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

truly wonderful, i love the almost passive emotion but also lighthearted emotion. great work :) check out some of mine if you get eh chance. i would love your opinion. keep writing, Mel (:

on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:52 pm
SoftballPoet PLATINUM, Branson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is like a rubber band. When one person lets go, it hurts the other person who is still holding on."

very relatible! love it (:

on Jun. 14 2010 at 4:02 pm
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

I think, at a child's birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

This might be the most amazing thing I have ever read. keep writing!

on Mar. 24 2010 at 8:59 am
One word AMAZING

BMMSKN said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 5:49 pm
LOVE THISSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BMMSKC said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:30 am
HAHA i love this poem

on Feb. 8 2010 at 10:31 am
Sabrinahco GOLD, Jefferson City, Missouri
10 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're not first, you're last"

I like it (:

This is wonderful.

on Jan. 11 2010 at 5:21 pm
soccerchick6 BRONZE, Elgin, Illinois
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I love this poem! It's creative and funny and just made me laugh. The perfect poem for ex's you dislike :)




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