Falling

April 13, 2016
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   There comes a moment when you fall that you aren't falling, but flying. 

   It isn't until you hit the ground and stop flying, you start to cry.

Not because of the pain of the fall, but because of the pain of the loss of flying. 






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Malcolm_ChaseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 10:27 am
I like that it's simple and meaningful. Wonderful work.
 
odessasimone This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 29, 2017 at 8:09 pm
You illustrated this feeling beautifully
 
SpeakerofWolvesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2017 at 8:39 pm
So sad and beautiful. Keep up the amazing work!
 
DarkHorse03 said...
Jun. 7, 2016 at 9:30 pm
Wow. Just Wow. This, I can relate to.
 
Tkenns replied...
Jun. 8, 2016 at 12:15 pm
Thank you :)
 
Tylersaysrawr said...
May 31, 2016 at 7:26 pm
take a look at mine please?
 
Tkenns replied...
Jun. 8, 2016 at 12:15 pm
Sure no problem
 
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