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The Visitor

March 11, 2016
By Laurazakorchemny BRONZE, Gilford, New Hampshire
Laurazakorchemny BRONZE, Gilford, New Hampshire
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I lie down peacefully at night,

leaving my bedroom door slightly ajar,

just enough for a thin beam of light

to shine in.

Ibegin to doze into a different state,

only to be awoken by a subtle scratch

coming from the otherside of my wooden door

followed by the hinges creaking

as it slowly swings open.

I see a figure

lumbering toward my bed side.

I can feel something else

nuzzled into the covers with me.

My legs are basically paralyzed,

I look down to see a black shadow

sprawled around my legs.

I reach down and gently rub

the black shadow behind the ear

and fall back asleep

ever so peacefully.


The author's comments:

Some nights while I'm almost asleep my dogs will comeinto my room and hop into bed with me. They always lay near my feet, so I can't move them. I started out eerie and left it up to the imagination what the balck shadow could be, then gave hints that it was only a dog.


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