Needlework MAG

February 8, 2009
By kaelyn GOLD, East Northport, New York
kaelyn GOLD, East Northport, New York
18 articles 95 photos 21 comments

Run your needle through this dark life
Threading it with sunlight.
Shed these demons of the past,
Forever clutching at my soul
Trying to claim it as their own.
Halt these wars of indecision,
That rage on within
Tearing at the fabric of my being.
Catch my breath for me
As I stumble endlessly into your eyes
So on we can stand,
Forever hand in hand,
Face this fight as one.



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on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:17 pm
BlurredReflection BRONZE, Beaverton, Oregon
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Giving up doesn\\\'t always mean your weak, sometimes it just means your strong enough to let go.\\\"

...speechless.

on Oct. 14 2011 at 9:17 am
Kidlet PLATINUM, Morris, Oklahoma
22 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No longer will they call you Desterted, or name your land Desolate. But you will be called Hephzibah, and your land Beulah; for the Lord will take delight in you, and your land will be married." -Isaiah 62:4

...Beautiful. I'd rate it five stars ten times if I could. :)

Angie said...
on May. 6 2011 at 3:44 pm
beautiful bro.

alexxeo GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 8:12 pm
alexxeo GOLD, Saint Helens, Oregon
12 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Absence from the ones we love is self from self-- a deadly banishment." -William Shakespere

"Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication." -Leonardo De Vinci

"Seduce my mind
...and speak those words to the point of
contradiction.
Hypocrisy never seemed so beautiful.
Your lips have it down to an
art. Oh, I know I'm in love with
wordplay.
Speak to me,
'til your lips are numb.
We'll always have pen and paper. " -By Anonymous, Mississauga, Canada

I love the last lines:

"So on we stand, forever hand in hand, face this fight as one."

I'm not even joking, this poem spoke to me.


on Sep. 6 2010 at 12:53 am
mandielynnrose GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, and I, I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

This poem really hits me in the heart. It is a great piece...keep writing!

on Aug. 15 2010 at 9:40 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

feels like it should be a song, good work. read some of mine?

JCG14 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 10:30 pm
JCG14 PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
21 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let it go, and it will all come back to you."

I love this, your imagery in here is fantastic. Good job!

on Mar. 16 2010 at 3:21 pm
the_Horsegirl SILVER, Minneapolis, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
People need dreams, there's as much nourishment in 'em as food.
--Dorothy Gilman

If there is such a thing as truth, it is as intricate and hidden as a crown of feathers.
--Isaac Bashevis Singer

Really, really good. I especially love the second line.

If you get the chance, please check out my work!

on Feb. 11 2010 at 4:28 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
11 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::

"When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!"
-Andy Milanokis?(sp)

wow

so so good

i love it no doubt

good job on getting in the mag

check out and comment on my workk plz??

on Nov. 2 2009 at 6:50 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

this is unbelievable. i love it!!!!!

on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:39 pm
TaylorMarie06 SILVER, Lafayette, Louisiana
8 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love, to suffer, to think...is to seek poetry."

you're welcome!

kaelyn GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 2:36 pm
kaelyn GOLD, East Northport, New York
18 articles 95 photos 21 comments
thank you!

on Oct. 11 2009 at 7:32 pm
TaylorMarie06 SILVER, Lafayette, Louisiana
8 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love, to suffer, to think...is to seek poetry."

This is really good




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