Into My Heart

The blade goes deeper
Into my heart
As you watch me
You laugh at my pain
I wish it didnt hurt
I thought dying would be easy
But it is the hardest thing ever
I wish it was faster
But it only slows down
All I feel is pain
As the blade goes deeper
Into My Heart





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Queenbee316 said...
Nov. 28, 2015 at 2:21 pm
WOW. ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW WOW WOW!!! I LOVE IT!!
 
BabySnickers15 replied...
Nov. 28, 2015 at 2:24 pm
Thanks. I really appreciate it. It's actually my fave.
 
Goshawk said...
Nov. 28, 2015 at 11:54 am
Wow. This is amazing.
 
BabySnickers15 replied...
Nov. 28, 2015 at 2:13 pm
Thanks Goshawk. This one is my fave.
 
thrillqueen126This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 25, 2015 at 8:37 pm
I love the line "I thought dying would be easy, but it is the hardest thing ever." Even though this poem is short, it manages to evoke so many emotions.
 
BabySnickers15 replied...
Nov. 26, 2015 at 7:36 am
Thanks, Thrillqueen. I really appreciate it.
 
riley_foxx said...
Nov. 25, 2015 at 5:34 pm
Wow this is actually really good, even tho I know nothing of poetry. I love the last line and how you repeated the title
 
BabySnickers15 replied...
Nov. 25, 2015 at 7:07 pm
Thank You Riley
 
CNBono17 said...
Nov. 25, 2015 at 2:51 pm
How to describe this? Vivid imagery, evocative metaphor. Wow.
 
BabySnickers15 replied...
Nov. 25, 2015 at 2:56 pm
Thanks. I really appreciate it.
 
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