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January 30, 2009
By Amy Wakamo BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
Amy Wakamo BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only.
- "It's Alright Ma (I'm Only Bleeding)," Bob Dylan


you’ve come so near to feel so far;
i think i’m drowning in the promise
of you

you strike me as rather tragic
(i’m still cool from the warmth
of your jacket)
it’s the most romantic thing i’ve
seen, your riot eyes
so lost, pounding out a new
niche for you (man, your fire
could burn this place down) –
i smile so slightly as you
ghost across my floor with
caffeine veins (cocaine ain’t
got nothin’ on you,
babe) and you are back, back,
back at the beginning and you’ve
never seen me before –
nothing has changed.

i still love you.



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on Nov. 19 2013 at 10:36 am
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

wow. this is amazing

on Nov. 27 2010 at 9:08 pm
maybenever BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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I love this poem. It reminds me a little of E. E. Cummings' "I carry your heart with me"...

on Aug. 15 2010 at 10:07 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

wow... I had no idea what to expect... and i was pleasently surprised! read some of mine?

on Apr. 17 2010 at 5:12 pm
lifeisajourney GOLD, Coronado, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a journey not a destination..."
"Perhaps our eyes need to be washed by our tears once in a while, so that we can see life in a clearer view again."
"Only those who will go too far, can possibly find out how far one can go"

this is really good

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 6:45 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Oh wow. I love this. I really have no other words (which is shocking if you knew me.) Bravo.

-Blessed Be!

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