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Breaking Bad Habits

November 10, 2015
By Danielle Najjar BRONZE, Pompton Plains, New Jersey
Danielle Najjar BRONZE, Pompton Plains, New Jersey
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You are my shameful habit
A lethal smoky addiction
Drawn to my clean lips
An instinctual desire to inhale
All your toxins at once

I want to burn you down to a
Glowing ember
And see the light gently fade
From that porcelain face

I will hold your wild taste hostage
In my mouth and let you slide down
And manifest in my lungs
Where you’ll cultivate and multiply
Like a chain of cancerous soldiers
Unwilling to falter

And when my mind is distrait and unaware
You’ll infiltrate
Killing the host who welcomed you
With open lips



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on Nov. 19 2015 at 1:15 pm
Danielle Najjar BRONZE, Pompton Plains, New Jersey
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Also thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

on Nov. 19 2015 at 1:15 pm
Danielle Najjar BRONZE, Pompton Plains, New Jersey
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oops! Yes I did. Please excuse me grammar and spelling!

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on Nov. 13 2015 at 3:33 pm
Lizzy567, Stone Mountain, Georgia
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OMG THIS IS SOO GOOD but in the 3rd stanza 5th line did u mean multiply and the 7th waiver?