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October 30, 2015
By azhang18 SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
azhang18 SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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Sunshine tickles
her faded freckles

misty breeze sways
her mahogany braids

the scent of salt water infiltrates her senses

a crisp aroma
a sigh of bliss

she ambles across the expanse
of burnt caramel sand

toes submerge for a second then
back above sea level for a breath

a trail of imprints contours
cusps into the coastline

waves steadily crash
into the cobblestone rubble

tides thump the towering drums
beside a crag

the cadence of her breaths
stable, sure
echo the tide’s heartbeat.


The author's comments:

This piece was originally a short story, but I decided it would stand better as a poem. The main emphasis of this piece is sound and imagery.


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on Nov. 5 2015 at 8:25 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Describe yourself in three words."
"Lazy."

I'm not going to criticize this poem or give constructive feedback because I can't. It's too beautiful for that. Amazing job!


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