When I am Dead MAG

January 21, 2009
By HannahW BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
HannahW BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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When I am dead, my dearest, don’t stick my bones
together with Scotch tape. Do not try to fit them
underneath a frame. Use them, one by one,
as a weapon, a gavel. My bones,
they can be good back scratchers, honey mixers,
and hands of clocks.

You can toss them across space
and see how far they’ll glide until another hand
slips across it. When I am dead, dearest,
thread my bones to the top of a mountain.

The next time you arrive at a glass sea,
spill it boldly. Spell your life in two parts,
watch them float until they descend
like a weight down into that container.



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on Oct. 28 2011 at 11:33 am
I really like this and i have enjoyed reading it

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 6:44 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Creepy, but good; deep. Think any of you could check out some of my work sometime?

on Oct. 18 2011 at 9:03 am
RandomRanda GOLD, Paoli, Indiana
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I'm Dancing for my life (im living my life).
Im all me! NO ONE is changing me!

its good! i love it! keep writing!

on Oct. 6 2011 at 10:04 am
i think it's a lil creepy but i like it!

on Sep. 30 2011 at 8:24 pm
HateKnuckle SILVER, Peru, New York
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on Sep. 29 2011 at 9:00 am
Countrylife4 GOLD, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday soon we're gonna catch that dream we've been chasing"
"Seven days without a horse makes one weak."
"The worst part of riding is when you dismount."

Insult my clothes, I say, “Okay, thanks for the compliment.”
Insult the way I look, I say, “Thanks for notifying me.”
Mock me and say riding isn’t a sport, and I’ll say,”You say that ’cause you can’t ride.” But before you make fun of my horse, make sure you have “911″ on your speed dial.

that's deep...i love it!!

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on Sep. 18 2011 at 1:52 pm
The_Jew GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
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very deep im at loss of words right now

on Sep. 14 2011 at 7:04 pm
paigeturner9 PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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this is unbelievable! Such a great poem :)

on Sep. 9 2011 at 11:18 am
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

THIS IS AMAZING <3

on Sep. 1 2011 at 9:33 am
LittleMissSunshine08_11 SILVER, Boston, Massachusetts
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Those who can laugh without cause have either found the true meaning of happiness or have gone stark raving mad. ~Norm Papernick

...Wow... :)

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on Aug. 23 2011 at 6:37 pm
chdinic GOLD, Enoree, South Carolina
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awesome :) very creative

 


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on Aug. 23 2011 at 12:22 pm
takeitasitis, Lakeville, Pennsylvania
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Life may cause you to suffer, but you can learn a lot from pain.

Magnificent.

on Aug. 20 2011 at 12:47 pm
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WELL SAID... 

on Aug. 18 2011 at 5:28 pm

why do i love this so much?

 


on Aug. 14 2011 at 12:17 pm
radicalhonesty GOLD, Alpharetta, Georgia
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There is no situation, facet, or aspect of life that cannot be improved with pizza. -Daria

This is unique and beautiful. I think I've interpreted (sp?) the first stanza, but the next two are so deep i can't begin to comprehend them. Could maybe explain it to me? thanks so much :D

on Aug. 1 2011 at 11:54 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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Strangely beautiful. (:

on Aug. 1 2011 at 10:27 am
Amsterdamsel DIAMOND, Henderson , Nevada
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it's different....but well written.

on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:50 am
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beautiful! i love it. it is strangly interesting.

 


on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:39 pm
Julez1D1 BRONZE, Kingsport, Tennessee
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"But unfortunatley all I have to give you is in imperfect heart, but it's a heart that beats only for you."

Beautiful.

on Jul. 10 2011 at 5:52 pm
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be the change you want to see in this world

weirdly interstin i love it


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