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When I am dead, my dearest, don’t stick my bones
together with Scotch tape. Do not try to fit them
underneath a frame. Use them, one by one,
as a weapon, a gavel. My bones,
they can be good back scratchers, honey mixers,
and hands of clocks.

You can toss them across space
and see how far they’ll glide until another hand
slips across it. When I am dead, dearest,
thread my bones to the top of a mountain.

The next time you arrive at a glass sea,
spill it boldly. Spell your life in two parts,
watch them float until they descend
like a weight down into that container.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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charzard said...
May 18, 2010 at 6:47 pm:
wow. this is amazing. very strong, very powerful.
 
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vickilovesu0227 said...
May 18, 2010 at 5:23 pm:
I'm a little comfused? Are you talking about people putting you to good use when you are dead? Help me out here.
 
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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2010 at 3:18 pm:
this is amazing, it's so powerful
 
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Dabestmexicanever said...
May 18, 2010 at 12:29 pm:
This was the best dang poem in the world! _ Dana Fulfer
 
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AndThisIsReal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2010 at 11:07 am:
In one word, this poem was stunning. Please read/ comment my work sometime.
 
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Korissa B. said...
May 18, 2010 at 10:54 am:
This was very thrilling... and incredible. i loved it. keep writing!!
 
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viofeather said...
May 18, 2010 at 4:55 am:
Very creative and mysterious. Kinda scary, actually. Loved it!
 
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CrazySquid said...
May 18, 2010 at 12:12 am:
very interesting in a very good way. it makes you think I like that.
 
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The_End said...
May 12, 2010 at 8:28 pm:

We need more poems like this--the kind that pack a mysterious punch.

Very creative. Poems like these are my favorites.

 
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11TAYLOR11 said...
May 8, 2010 at 2:09 am:
i really like it ,reminds me of the hard things in life
 
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Miseltoe said...
May 7, 2010 at 4:53 pm:
I dont understand the meanninig. It sounds nice but in the end the lines get blurred
 
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Rulesofmyown said...
May 1, 2010 at 1:36 pm:
this is amazing... and to all the stupid people who said its creepy allow me to say you are so shallow! great peom, keep up the good work.
 
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BlueInk94 said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 9:10 am:
This Poem is so much more than just what the words say. Its has a mysterious but subtle metaphor. I LOOVE IT! could you chech out my stuff and give me some advice. Thanx!
 
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KaytiE said...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 9:11 am:
Agreed, they reallly are. :)
 
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Whisperer said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 8:22 pm:

this is really good. it gives a different meaning than what most poems about this would be like. i like it alot! good job! :)

check out my stuff if you like

 
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dear_cinthya said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 7:14 pm:
with a tital like that i was expecting the usual sad poem but this is so much more.
 
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darb_iamsecond said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 3:05 pm:
Wow THIS IS ahhmazing(:
 
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shafer15 said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 2:07 pm:
People need to pay attention because ya know what? Ya'll might actually learn somethin. I mean come on read between the lines people. No wonder ya'll probably can't get dates!! Oh by the way, this poem is amazin
 
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X_Dysfuntional_Lyrics_X said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 12:25 pm:
People seriously need to quit hating on this poem! I think it was brilliant and amazing! Poetry is a way of expressing yourself. The good poems always leave you wondering about it or asking yourself what it meant to you. A lot of people interperate(i kno i spelled that wrong) poems in their own way. Poems dont have to JUST be happy and bubbly or whatever. They can be whatever you want them to be. They express whatever you want them to. They tell a story the way YOU want it to be to... (more »)
 
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chrissyclarinetist said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 2:00 pm:
wow man. ur crazy. this poem is great! good job HannahW =)
 
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