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A Depth of Darkness

February 6, 2015
By Turbo223 SILVER, Lancaster, Wisconsin
Turbo223 SILVER, Lancaster, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Is there a way to escape something unescapable?


Do you stare into it, or do you approach it,

Do you walk around it, or wait as you sit?
It shows an opposite world, filled with cold and fear,
Still I stare into my soul, my thoughts becoming clear.
The feeling of sorrow and pain uplifting my mind,
My fate feeling printed, feeling ready to sign.
Tell me this; let me know, of what you think I am,
And help me see the light, see the person they disband.


The author's comments:

I created this late one night as I stared outside, and started typing. I looked into my soul and typed more. Then rhyme comes to rhyme, here it is. 


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Ana143 GOLD said...
on Feb. 13 2015 at 11:31 am
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your always beautiful in my eyes"
"Be who you are not what someone else wants you to be"

welcome! :)

on Feb. 12 2015 at 4:43 pm
Turbo223 SILVER, Lancaster, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Is there a way to escape something unescapable?

Thank you!

Ana143 GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2015 at 1:20 pm
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your always beautiful in my eyes"
"Be who you are not what someone else wants you to be"

Its just really, There are now works to describe it in my opinon. Nice work! :)

on Feb. 11 2015 at 1:09 pm
Turbo223 SILVER, Lancaster, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Is there a way to escape something unescapable?

Thank you :)

on Feb. 9 2015 at 1:52 pm
fearlessAngel17 PLATINUM, Lake Alfred, Florida
34 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing happens unless first a dream












- Carl Sandburg

love the depth of it, you can tell you looked deep into you soul