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If I should ever have a heart to stop,

It would stop its counting beat for you

However the burning desire

To burn your lips with mine of fire

'Cause your icy touch sends a shrill

And sets my nerves alight still

 

The exhilarating rush when your adoring eyes lock mine

still makes my cheeks flame and cower in sublime

 

And if the world should perish not once but twice

Fire or ice

I would face my doom with you at my side and laugh

And I would whisper the final words 'I love you'

And not have to listen to hear you say them too.






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hannababexoxox said...
Jun. 23, 2015 at 2:07 am
dis cute :)
 
CharleyHeelis said...
Jun. 3, 2015 at 1:06 pm
Thank You @ToBeLovedBeLovable35
 
ToBeLovedBeLovable35 said...
Apr. 25, 2015 at 4:33 pm
Creative ... I likey!!!!!
 
CharleyHeelis said...
Apr. 5, 2015 at 12:18 pm
Hiya EmmaM2000, erm yes I do have other work , Reflection of the Heart, A book review of Inkheart by Cornelia Funk and a pictue will soon be up of the sea ... thanks xoxo
 
EmmaM2000 said...
Apr. 5, 2015 at 12:14 pm
Sorry I meant Sweet not Sweat
 
EmmaM2000 said...
Apr. 5, 2015 at 12:10 pm
This is really sweat , do you have any other work?
 
survivorking82 said...
Apr. 5, 2015 at 7:38 am
This is good do you have any other work?
 
lucyloo13 said...
Apr. 2, 2015 at 5:38 pm
Awwwwwwwwww this is really cute !!
 
CharleyHeelis said...
Apr. 1, 2015 at 11:36 am
Thank You to all of the people who put lovely comments on here :-) xoxo
 
CharleyHeelis said...
Apr. 1, 2015 at 11:33 am
Thank you , mms33_abc :-)
 
mms33_abc said...
Apr. 1, 2015 at 8:45 am
Your really creative , I'm certain that you will grow into an inspiring young writer.
 
CharleyHeelis said...
Apr. 1, 2015 at 8:42 am
Your welcome!
 
emmaxox said...
Apr. 1, 2015 at 6:21 am
oh , ok thank you that makes sense now ... :)
 
emmaxox said...
Mar. 31, 2015 at 5:19 pm
oh ok , I have read the comment and I guess it makes more sense now. Thanks
 
CharleyHeelis said...
Mar. 31, 2015 at 5:05 pm
No emmaxox , as I said in earlier comments it is purely about twilight. :)
 
emmaxox said...
Mar. 31, 2015 at 4:49 pm
Is this about your boyfriend/ husband or something?
 
johndoelovesyou**** said...
Mar. 27, 2015 at 2:34 pm
I like this poem is really quite emotional :-)
 
rocker chicken 252 said...
Mar. 26, 2015 at 1:34 pm
Isnt final finale????????
 
Abiiiiiiiiiiiixoxo said...
Mar. 26, 2015 at 1:33 pm
***** Is *****
 
Abiiiiiiiiiiiixoxo said...
Mar. 26, 2015 at 1:31 pm
This ia cute
 
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