Purple MAG

January 8, 2009
By Alexander Pollak GOLD, San Francisco, California
Alexander Pollak GOLD, San Francisco, California
13 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Fields of grasses
dried blonde by the sun
shadowed by storms
royal purple clouds reaching
toward the oceans like old coke bottles
rain streaming deep into the red soil
bulging dirt gives way
tentacled weeds grabbing fiercely
in the twilight cast by oak trees
shining leaves dying
withering
drying richly orange
under the swelling storm clouds
rain like cold pebbles nurturing its
upturned arms



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on Feb. 10 2010 at 4:41 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

that was bombing! ur view is totally interesting and new.

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on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:46 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Fabulous! I love the imagery, a feast for the imagination!

-Blessed Be!

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on Nov. 4 2009 at 2:57 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Great meaning and insight. I loved it.

Beautiful poem darling=]

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on Jun. 8 2009 at 7:28 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This has good imagery and it is so interesting. I love how you describe things in this piece and how you use analogies. Great job!

on May. 10 2009 at 5:26 pm
BlackMoonWhiteSky PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Thus is life, live it, or die trying!

Beautiful...

Joy26 said...
on Jan. 17 2009 at 8:17 pm
Fabulous imagery, great details, and a really great poetic sense... 5/5!


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