December 21, 2014
By Gagax SILVER, Sugarland, Texas
Gagax SILVER, Sugarland, Texas
5 articles 1 photo 46 comments

They are better left unexplored;
The vast, uneven terrain filled with many holes
Oops I fell down!
Now to be eaten by the hounds.

The sword that flashes,
The tears that splashes.
The hate that spreads,
That horrible feeling of dread.

That fleeting laughter that bubbles up to the sky,
The warm, comforting love that eventually dies,
Why oh why need I cry?
It’s useless by and by.

The author's comments:

I wrote this after thinking how useless negative feelings are and how its better not to feel them at all. 

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Soham said...
on Aug. 29 2016 at 12:24 pm
Soham, Kolkata, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's Sweeeet.....sometimes Tangy, and ya, often seasoned with pepper.;..;.sometimes tastes Spicy! But :( Bitter at times also,
YES>>>> It's LIFE.... ;)

Light, and nice feelings, vesseled in it.

on Aug. 22 2016 at 6:50 pm
M501athletic GOLD, USA, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is never too late to have a new dream- C.S. Lewis

Wow! Vey good at describing the emotions! You are very talented! Keep up the great work!

Lizmendoza said...
on Jul. 29 2016 at 8:35 am
Lizmendoza, Montebello, California
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This is awesome. It's LizIsACutie, btw.

Gagax SILVER said...
on Jul. 9 2016 at 4:52 am
Gagax SILVER, Sugarland, Texas
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i agree :D thanks!

ZEKIm SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2015 at 1:04 pm
ZEKIm SILVER, Sofia, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm for truth, no matter who tells it. I'm for justice, no matter who it's for or against."
"A man who stands for nothing will fall for anything."
- Malcolm X

You are really good at this! You know how to use words properly too :)Great work Won't it be better if you put the word "tears" in single form :D I'm sorry, I just think "The tear that splashes" would sound better my opinion only! :) It is really great though

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