December 21, 2014
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They are better left unexplored;
The vast, uneven terrain filled with many holes
Oops I fell down!
Now to be eaten by the hounds.

The sword that flashes,
The tears that splashes.
The hate that spreads,
That horrible feeling of dread.

That fleeting laughter that bubbles up to the sky,
The warm, comforting love that eventually dies,
Why oh why need I cry?
It’s useless by and by.

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Soham said...
Aug. 29, 2016 at 12:24 pm
Light, and nice feelings, vesseled in it.
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Aug. 22, 2016 at 6:50 pm
Wow! Vey good at describing the emotions! You are very talented! Keep up the great work!
Lizmendoza said...
Jul. 29, 2016 at 8:35 am
This is awesome. It's LizIsACutie, btw.
ZekiMJ said...
Jan. 9, 2015 at 1:04 pm
You are really good at this! You know how to use words properly too :)Great work Won't it be better if you put the word "tears" in single form :D I'm sorry, I just think "The tear that splashes" would sound better my opinion only! :) It is really great though
Gagax replied...
Jul. 9, 2016 at 4:52 am
i agree :D thanks!
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