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Wonderland Awaits

December 12, 2014
By MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci


Hurry up Alice,

and fall while you still can.

There's not much time left, before the gate is closed.

What gate, you say?

Well of course the gate to the hole.

What other gate is there?

Hurry up Alice,

we're running out of time.

What are you hesitating for,

let's go! Let's go!

Alice, Alice

there's no need for caution.

It's time to come,

and come you will.

To Wonderland,

to discover wonders within mysteries.

An unsolvable world, needless of logic.

It's time to come, 

don't delay the inevitable.

Let us go, Alice, it's time to fall-

oh, and one more thing.

 

Welcome to Wonderland.



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on Jan. 3 2015 at 2:39 am
Jasmine11 SILVER, Delhi, Other
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I like the central idea of the poem. The repetition makes the poem even more readable and beautiful. Nice poem!

on Dec. 22 2014 at 12:15 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

Oh thank you for the feedback!

on Dec. 22 2014 at 11:34 am
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
74 articles 1 photo 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.”
G.K. Chesterton

"And you, you ridiculous people, you expect me to help you."
Denis Johnson

I absolutely loved how you took the story of Alice in Wonderland and slightly made it your own. I really love your creative touch to this internationally known story! :)


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