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My Eyes; like...

December 16, 2014
By ToPonJah DIAMOND, San Diego, California
ToPonJah DIAMOND, San Diego, California
50 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"So shines a good deed , in a weary world." -William Shakespeare
"I don't know..." -Bill Cosby
"STOMP, STOMP, SLAM!!!" -George Lopez


My eyes like sharks

 

Shifty and glistening in the

Dark

 

My eyes of grey and black and white

Seeing searching lurching in the

Night

My eyes; like…
 


The author's comments:

This is to be a part of a series. I hope to find the inspiration to do so.


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on Dec. 26 2014 at 10:23 pm
ToPonJah DIAMOND, San Diego, California
50 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"So shines a good deed , in a weary world." -William Shakespeare
"I don't know..." -Bill Cosby
"STOMP, STOMP, SLAM!!!" -George Lopez

Thank you! I really get excited when I see that someone took that time to comment and tell me what they thought of my work! Thank you. I happen to write some good horror stories. But I haven't posted ANY for the sake of others mostly.

on Dec. 20 2014 at 8:15 am
TravelerenRoute GOLD, Ribera, New Mexico
13 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate.
Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.

It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us.
We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant,
gorgeous, handsome, talented and fabulous?

Actually, who are you not to be?
You are a child of God.

Your playing small does not serve the world.
There is nothing enlightened about shrinking
so that other people won't feel insecure around you.
We are all meant to shine, as children do.

We were born to make manifest the glory of God within us.
It is not just in some; it is in everyone.

And, as we let our own light shine, we consciously give
other people permission to do the same.
As we are liberated from our fear,
our presence automatically liberates others."
Marianne Williamson

Hello, I really like your poem…although it is a bit dark and creepy… Well done.


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