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Where My Heart Is

November 14, 2014
By Stronger_Than_Yesterday BRONZE, Ruffs Dale, Pennsylvania
Stronger_Than_Yesterday BRONZE, Ruffs Dale, Pennsylvania
2 articles 1 photo 6 comments

The dirt, an unforgotten feel to my feet
Years of running bare foot imprinted on the rough ground
Tree leaves wave, reminding me of days passed
Daisies dance and sway among the fields
Calm clarity flows over this place
As if painted here by an artist and his skillful hand

The kitchen that sweats in the summer heat
The living room with its decorations in the winter
Adorn with lights and joy
Down these halls, up in these rooms sits nothing of value
But still I see memories that will last
Good and bad
Ugly and pretty
Memories of a family all the same

Even when we are long gone
This place will never forget us
This dirt, this house, this land
Forever marked with our stamp of life
They are a part of us as we are apart them
This is my home


The author's comments:

This poem is about the farm I’ve grown up on. No place on earth has ever held the amount of safety and security that I feel when I step on to this land. It has been passed down through the family for more than two-hundred years and no matter where I go or what happens this place never loses it’s touch. In light of some of the resent events in my family, I’ve realize it even though someday I will be gone but what I do and who I am will truly be lost. My family and my home will remember me forever.


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on Nov. 29 2014 at 11:53 pm
Stronger_Than_Yesterday BRONZE, Ruffs Dale, Pennsylvania
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The place itself is super tiny!

on Nov. 28 2014 at 12:56 pm
stevensmara99, Altoona, Pennsylvania
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"The artist is nothing without the gift, but the gift is nothing without work."
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Beautiful! I've been too Ruff Dale,PA before :O I'm from Altoona 

on Nov. 27 2014 at 4:57 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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I think it's beautifully written, the only thing I would recommend is making readers want to read from the ver first word. Drawing us in with excitement and drama...so etching that will make are eyes pop. But I truly love this poem that you have written and your doing a great job! Keep it up!

Nobuo GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2014 at 3:06 pm
Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
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This is good stuff, you're good at describing the farm where you've had so many memories in your life this far. I would maybe compress it a little to leave an impact and something that sticks and yet be short or brief like a memory, it comes and goes. There and then gone.

on Nov. 25 2014 at 11:58 am
Stronger_Than_Yesterday BRONZE, Ruffs Dale, Pennsylvania
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Funny how the strong things come from your weakest place... that just be a start to a new poem...

on Nov. 25 2014 at 11:57 am
Stronger_Than_Yesterday BRONZE, Ruffs Dale, Pennsylvania
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This place is so hard to put into words. It's not easily forgotten... It sort gets under your skin and just stays there as creepy as that sounds! Lol

on Nov. 25 2014 at 1:20 am
darkerthanblack GOLD, Dhaka, Other
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Its really got a strong meaning.

on Nov. 24 2014 at 10:29 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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this is very nice. i love how descriptibe it is..after reading it i wanna go to your farm lol but all in all this is a nice piece and its nicely penned . keep up the good work :D

on Nov. 24 2014 at 2:30 pm
Stronger_Than_Yesterday BRONZE, Ruffs Dale, Pennsylvania
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Thank you!!!! I love to hear feedback :)

iveltac BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2014 at 1:16 pm
iveltac BRONZE, Columbus, Kansas
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i like the style and how you did it. How you based it off of where u grew up from. Keep up the good work