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Sound of the Storm

October 29, 2014
By Swimmergirl101 GOLD, Rolla, Missouri
Swimmergirl101 GOLD, Rolla, Missouri
16 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be Happy. It's one way of being wise" - Collette


Bang!
Buzz…flicker…
Darkness
Crash!..Boom!..Bang!..
I gasp.
Into the cold,
Wet, pouring rain
Shuffle.
The wind whispers
Candles glow bright.
Grey light filters through
the stained glass windows.
Boom!
The quiet music of rain.
Patter, patter
Shiver
Flicker…buzz
Light.
Relief.


The author's comments:

When I was at school, our power went out and we had an assignment to do a sound poem. Please comment, your opinion uis helpful. Give me constructive criticism.   :) Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!

 

-swimmergirl101


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on Nov. 24 2014 at 1:50 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This was unique. I loved it, Swimmergirl101. :) It has emotion and sound to it and it also has beauty of its own. I found it beautiful and I enjoyed it. :)   You do have such a talent and greatness and light and beauty, and you are a wonderful and talented and beautiful writer and person. :)    I wish I could show you how much I enjoyed this and how I love it. Thank you so much, my friend! For sharing this. :)