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The Willow that Weeps

October 28, 2014
By livtroi BRONZE, Lake Ariel, Pennsylvania
livtroi BRONZE, Lake Ariel, Pennsylvania
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My branches droop

hidden inside me by my garnish of green.

The light tries to shine into me,

but I always block the sheen.

Millons of drops fall down,

for it is too much for my leaves to hold.

Weakness seizes me.

I wonder if the drops falling are my own.

The world sees my outer layer as greater.

My inside is hidden.

I see the darkness of my own shadows

and my twigs secluded in.

Winter captures over.

My drooping branches blend in with the cold white snow.

I look the same as the other trees now.

My leaves of weakness they will not know.



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on Aug. 29 2016 at 2:28 pm
pineappler03 SILVER, Waterford, Connecticut
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Interesting title, plus amazing description. I love the line, "My leaves of weakness they will not know." This is actually pretty relatable to re life to, so I can connect more with the trees feelings. Good job :)