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Domestic Goddess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.


My
mother told
me that if I were smart, I too
would become a domestic goddess, like her.
For one thing, she says that they are the wisest of women
armed with the sacred knowledge that tonic water can eradicate most stains
or that baking soda in the refrigerator can keep most meats from spoiling too quickly.
She argues that Aphrodite’s beauty pales in comparison to the colors of laundered clothes
and a supper of tepid, golden chicken that only an experienced domestic goddess can achieve.
Our home is her Mt. Olympus
and the kitchen serves as Mother’s temple,
despite the fact that there is no sculpture erected in her honor,
unless you want to count the vanilla candle that I made for her last Christmas.
Her nimble fingers scold my clumsier ones as they falter over slicing salad greens.
I say that Homer has a broader mind’s eye than any goddess, I’d much rather write The Iliad.

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Fia-fiaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 12 at 6:36 pm:
This is warm, beautiful and amazingly well written. Be proud! thank you :)
 
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PrincessBubblegumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 11:39 pm:
This reminds me of my mother. I love this.
 
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raindance72This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 6:55 pm:

I did Greek mythology in SS last year so to my surprise I understood and could relate to every Greek reference! I loved it, so great and creative.

By the way, I'm in need of some reviews on my work. I'd love to have anyone check it out and post comments! :)

 
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bpjrobertThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 1:43 pm:
This is very good. I like it. My favorite part is "her nimble fingers scold my clumsier ones."
 
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aurorairisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 10:19 am:
I love this poem!! I love all the comparisons to Greek mythology! It's beautiful!
 
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pNONYMOUS said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 12:57 pm:
whoa. I love the words you use in your poem, its really creative and constructive. your mom reminds me a little of my headmaster!
 
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DisicpleofChristandJesusEnthusiastThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 3:39 pm:
Interesting topic. Great word choice, nice job.
 
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Free- said...
May 23, 2011 at 5:25 pm:
Interesting, creative topic and I mean that. Wish I could think of such a creative topic
 
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RedRidingHood said...
May 15, 2011 at 11:47 pm:
This poem was well written with lots of imagery. I also  like the way she compared her mothers life to greek mythology. The symbolism of the greek mythology simplified her thoughts. Her use of Syntax and diction were well developed.
 
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ema2423This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 15, 2011 at 9:38 am:
Amazing! I love the real world sense instead of a fairytale or a myth! :)
 
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JMThe-one said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 8:49 pm:
I'm not sure why people think this is funny, but it's pretty good. Great use of allusion at the end. 
 
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WillowFalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 6:57 pm:
That's such a cute poem! Good job! :)
 
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ellie315 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 5:29 pm:
This is written very beautifully - I love the idea - and the diction! Very good job:)
 
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bookdevourer101 said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 10:51 am:
The title is very suiting! Great use of metaphors and symbolism. This poem made me laugh, reminding me of my mom.
 
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lil_reeses1015 said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 8:53 am:
my mom THINKS she is a goddess!!!!  but i love her!!!! <33
 
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Andersonandy said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 12:42 pm:
Now this is poetry.
 
Inflatable_Corn This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 6:18 pm :
Aye, captain.
 
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cordr3 said...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 4:58 pm:
this poem made me lol, it was a great use of metaphores, and i hope to see more funny poems such as this one.
 
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Artifactfinder said...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 12:45 pm:
How old is that girl in the picture?
 
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Evaine said...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 8:21 am:

thats really sweet and very creative! :)

 

 
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kmarie14 said...
Nov. 21, 2010 at 12:22 am:
:) gotta love moms :) great peom thanks for sharing :)
 
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MRose911 said...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 8:28 pm:
this reminds me of my mom!! :) thanks so much for sharing! :)
 
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tenz11 said...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 7:42 pm:

whoa.

this is beautiful!

 

 
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Erica B. said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 6:42 pm:
This is so brilliant. The ending is unexpected and inspiring.
 
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mariel_f said...
Oct. 7, 2010 at 10:12 am:
well written poem! super interesting. i love the perspective as well as the allusions to mythology. it's a great frame for a college essay or a personal essay. though i'm not sure i'm a fan of the last line.
 
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MarthaMyDear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:39 pm:
I'm not sure how I feel about the end of this piece. Why Homer? why a man? The message I got from this is that working outside of the home is a very masculine thing to do.
 
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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 11, 2010 at 11:44 am:
speaking as a serious feminist, i really liked this poem. particularly the ending.   : )
 
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AuntRiah said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:01 pm:
I love the discription in this. Very creative. (:
 
starlight26:)This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 28, 2010 at 5:41 pm :
I totally agree :)
 
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jamrock636 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 4:40 pm:
This was great! I love the mentioning of baking soda and getting rid of stains, it reminds me so much of my grandma. It was also a great way to look at domesticity, through Greek mythology. Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my work.
 
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roseann This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 3:01 pm:
loved this poem. my mom's the same, she's the best cook, she never gives up on my own cooking. keep it up!
 
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SOSaiXD This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 1:51 pm:
I love the Greek allusions! The comparison was fantastic. (: I never would've thought of it that way.
 
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ird13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 6:45 am:
WOW That was really good! I like the way I could feel the way you speak and it had the rhythm of normal conversation while professing something so poetic :]
 
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sleeplessdreamer said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 7:15 pm:
This was pretty good. I like it a lot, very different for a poem. Check out my work, anyone, if you ever get a chance!
 
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xAllegria said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 4:12 am:
That's Nigella Lawson's cookbook... excellent pancakes, oh yessss... haha well anyways Nice idea with the comparisms and stuff. Simple but effective... pretty good.
 
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FondduLac said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 11:34 am:
I love this. Great style. Great message.
 
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cgm093 said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 11:15 pm:
I love how you took something so ordinary and paralleled it to Homer. Great job, i really really like it :)
 
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unfamil-LIAR-minds said...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 2:12 pm:
I love the way this poem is written. It has so much depth. I think mothers should always be admired in some way. Your poem agrees.
 
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Reader:) said...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 9:11 pm:
So your saying that you and your mom are smart because you stay home and cook...
 
Reader:) replied...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 9:12 pm :
and wash the laundry...
 
Reader:) replied...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 10:21 pm :
explain...
 
theauthor replied...
Dec. 30, 2009 at 10:26 pm :
the mother thinks it's a smart idea for her daughter to become a "domestic goddess" and fulfill the ideal "womans role" in the household. the child doesn't want to, but respects her mother and admires all of the things that she does around the household just the same.
 
?!Zeya!? replied...
Jan. 16, 2010 at 11:49 am :
Really Really kewl
 
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kpf1991 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 10:10 pm:
Hey could you check out "anguish" or "They see through me" and rate it or just let know what you think? you have great talent and i'd really appreciate your input
 
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ariwrites94 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 5:38 pm:
Hey, wonderful work!!! this is amazing . . . U write beautifuly so continue writing!!! also plz check out my poem called "Sensitive Am I" and it would be appreciated a comment and a rating, thankx! and keep up the good work!!!
 
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theauthor said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 1:41 pm:
wow, i am the author of this poem and i would like to thank all of you for taking the time to even read my work. you have no idea how much i deeply appreciate your feedback.
 
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OutcastGirl1994 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 1:34 pm:
I Love It!! It Shows Simply The Strength Of All Mothers That Often Goes Unappreciated! Kudos To You!
 
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Schubster said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 7:40 am:
wonderful and very original. Any Olympian fan would love this. Great job! :)
 
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Aly S. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 10:26 pm:
This poem is amazing. I love the Greek Mythology references.
 
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Anblue said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 6:43 pm:
lol, i luv greek mythology
athena is my fave, but my current avvie is Aphrodite
 
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