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hello little hour

goodnight earth
to the sleeping bodies
minus beautiful minds abuzz

goodnight winnipeg
to the transit buses
minus streetlights aligned

goodnight house
to the frameworks
minus noiseless musings

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Evaine said...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 8:30 am
that is really good.  i think your plus and minus system really made it work.  great job! :)
 
bmmsjc said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 10:35 am
Its not bad
 
kayey113 said...
Aug. 30, 2009 at 11:52 pm
... absolutely brilliant. have you ever considered writing song lyrics?
 
spaaceships This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 10:14 am
thanks ! :)
i'm really no good with lyrics. i'm awful at pairing words with music. but thanks again !
 
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