hello little hour MAG

December 26, 2008
By aerdna BRONZE, Winnipeg, Other
aerdna BRONZE, Winnipeg, Other
4 articles 1 photo 3 comments

hello little hour

goodnight earth
to the sleeping bodies
minus beautiful minds abuzz

goodnight winnipeg
to the transit buses
minus streetlights aligned

goodnight house
to the frameworks
minus noiseless musings


The author's comments:
inspired by a dream

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Evaine SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2010 at 8:30 am
Evaine SILVER, Schulkill Haven, Pennsylvania
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that is really good.  i think your plus and minus system really made it work.  great job! :)

bmmsjc said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 10:35 am
Its not bad

aerdna BRONZE said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 10:14 am
aerdna BRONZE, Winnipeg, Other
4 articles 1 photo 3 comments
thanks ! :)

i'm really no good with lyrics. i'm awful at pairing words with music. but thanks again !

kayey113 said...
on Aug. 30 2009 at 11:52 pm
... absolutely brilliant. have you ever considered writing song lyrics?




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