(uni)versal MAG

October 23, 2014
By SophieLoffie GOLD, Wilmington, Massachusetts
SophieLoffie GOLD, Wilmington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"The only way out of the labyrinth of suffering is to forgive."
-John Green; Looking For Alaska


when (you) look at her,
your eyes (are) brighter than the sun
and (her) eyes are black holes
that suck you into her little (world).
so (too) think I had a chance
was the funniest joke of all,
because while you were my whole world,
you saw a completely different star


The author's comments:

in line five I used the too form because of the parantheses, I know the correct form for the line. 


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