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Thought Of Falling In Love

October 10, 2014
By VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.


The thought of falling in love is always Killing!

As it sometimes hurt my sweet feelings.

Falling in love for me is tough,

With a person who is more than rough.

 

But falling in love sometimes makes me smile,

As it makes my feet fly high in the sky.

The person with whom I'm gonna Fall in love,

Is going to be someone with a heart like a Dove.

 

Though thought of falling in love is not so good,

Yet it could fill my belly without any food.

When I will fall in love,

The whole world will watch, for i'm so tough.

 

But if I ever get deceived in love,

I would give up my thought of falling in love.


The author's comments:

Written from beneath my HEART!!!!!! 


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on Dec. 12 2014 at 9:58 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

Not every poem needs to be deep. This one is very honest, and simple. I liked it, thanks for sharing this.

LyricBlunt said...
on Oct. 26 2014 at 2:39 pm
LyricBlunt, Denver, Colorado
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I love this poem, i think love makes me want to fly in the sky too. Good job you nailed this poem.

on Oct. 16 2014 at 2:42 pm
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

Thanks! @promethen I will try to work batter on my other poem and I am quite upeat about, that you'll like them! :)

on Oct. 16 2014 at 10:31 am
Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
8 articles 0 photos 85 comments

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An eye for an eye will make the whole world blind....

lot of improvement is required. usage of words isn't quite good. 3/5

on Oct. 14 2014 at 1:57 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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oh wow nice poem! kinda relatable but i love it :-D . nice job

on Oct. 14 2014 at 1:54 pm
Angel.Of.Darkness, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is not wise to judge others based on your own preconceptions and by their appearances ♡

               Nice!!


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