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Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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beautifulxdisaster said...
May 25, 2011 at 9:00 am:

this is really good

 

 
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beautifulxdisaster said...
May 25, 2011 at 9:00 am:
his is really really good!
 
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TolkienLewisWhitman said...
May 19, 2011 at 7:07 pm:
Wonderful! I love how you placed your sentences and stanzas. I will ask though, why did you put a period on the first line, and not the others? Did you do this on purpose, or was it an accident?
 
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Kat4ever333 said...
May 18, 2011 at 9:40 pm:
wow... that was amazing
 
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renni said...
May 6, 2011 at 5:04 pm:
this was so great !! i loved it, keep it up :) 
 
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Smurfy_Liebe said...
May 6, 2011 at 12:26 pm:
This is amazing!! Keep it up! =)
 
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jaaaws_17 said...
May 5, 2011 at 10:56 am:

Verrrry poisonous C: hahaha

I really enjoyed this; Comic book/ lyrics from ICP.. Niceee.

 
Jariel V. replied...
May 5, 2011 at 5:18 pm :

that was good check mine out 

 

 
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meagash said...
May 4, 2011 at 4:15 pm:

such a cool poem!!! nice use of detail!

 

 
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J.Chap said...
May 3, 2011 at 1:42 pm:
Wow you can really write! I love everything about this poem, mainly your word choice! What a wonderful poem! Keep it up :)
 
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Kittygirl3 said...
May 2, 2011 at 1:09 pm:
I totally love this poem!
 
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myheartcandecide said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 1:34 pm:
this was really interesting to read! i love it!(:
 
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raylaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 5:05 pm:
This is a very interesting piece of writing, but in some ways very true. What appears to be the beast is not always the real beast. What appears to be the beauty is not always the real beauty.
 
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queentabbiecat99 said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 10:26 am:
i love it XD its so creepy keep it up
 
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KiKiLovee said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 4:12 pm:
veery deep sounds like it took some thouqht. veery quud
 
sallysunshine replied...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 9:40 am :
wtf.
 
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HerSecretEscape said...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 10:51 am:
This is a wicked creative title! kudos.
 
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BookWormx said...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 5:54 am:
I enjoyed the poem. Keep writing. <3
 
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aud_bee said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 1:50 pm:
i really enjoy the poem i think it will go to the magzine
 
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Dominicano_Loco said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 2:48 pm:
I truly enjoyed this poem. It reminds us of that age old saying "Judge not a book by its cover" excellent job. :)
 
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