Beauty is the Beast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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annabol said...
May 29, 2011 at 3:39 pm
Beautifully written, mysterious with an edge of danger to it, just like the subject. Really brilliant job!!:D
free_bird21 said...
May 25, 2011 at 11:10 am
i love the use of language, like something you would hear in the classics, with an air of mystery and expressiveness, and fluency. keep up with the nice work!
PrincessDarkness replied...
May 25, 2011 at 2:47 pm
This is great  it's wonderful.
beautifulxdisaster said...
May 25, 2011 at 9:00 am

this is really good


beautifulxdisaster said...
May 25, 2011 at 9:00 am
his is really really good!
TolkienLewisWhitman said...
May 19, 2011 at 7:07 pm
Wonderful! I love how you placed your sentences and stanzas. I will ask though, why did you put a period on the first line, and not the others? Did you do this on purpose, or was it an accident?
Kat4ever333 said...
May 18, 2011 at 9:40 pm
wow... that was amazing
renni said...
May 6, 2011 at 5:04 pm
this was so great !! i loved it, keep it up :) 
Smurfy_Liebe said...
May 6, 2011 at 12:26 pm
This is amazing!! Keep it up! =)
jaaaws_17 said...
May 5, 2011 at 10:56 am

Verrrry poisonous C: hahaha

I really enjoyed this; Comic book/ lyrics from ICP.. Niceee.

Jariel V. replied...
May 5, 2011 at 5:18 pm

that was good check mine out 


meagash said...
May 4, 2011 at 4:15 pm

such a cool poem!!! nice use of detail!


J.Chap said...
May 3, 2011 at 1:42 pm
Wow you can really write! I love everything about this poem, mainly your word choice! What a wonderful poem! Keep it up :)
Kittygirl3 said...
May 2, 2011 at 1:09 pm
I totally love this poem!
myheartcandecide said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 1:34 pm
this was really interesting to read! i love it!(:
rayla said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 5:05 pm
This is a very interesting piece of writing, but in some ways very true. What appears to be the beast is not always the real beast. What appears to be the beauty is not always the real beauty.
queentabbiecat99 said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 10:26 am
i love it XD its so creepy keep it up
KiKiLovee said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 4:12 pm
veery deep sounds like it took some thouqht. veery quud
sallysunshine replied...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 9:40 am
HerSecretEscape said...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 10:51 am
This is a wicked creative title! kudos.
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