Beauty is the Beast MAG

By Bridget Walker, El Dorado, KS

Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands

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on Feb. 2 2012 at 7:18 pm
C.K.Snow SILVER, Morden, Other
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Wow! Great imagery in this poem!

on Feb. 1 2012 at 9:25 pm
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Where a rose is, a thistle can not grow" ~The Secret Garden
"Be the change you wish to see in the world" ~Ghandi
"Every road leads somewhere, its just a matter of where you want to go..." ~???

Lovely, nicely done

on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:36 pm
stardreamer SILVER, Flemington, New Jersey
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love this poem!! :) very creative !!

on Jan. 31 2012 at 2:48 am
ashleydarling GOLD, Lafayette, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Of course this is happening in your head, Harry. But why on earth would that mean it's not real?"

Very beautiful! Wonderful use of prose. Painted a lovely image.

on Jan. 29 2012 at 4:21 pm
Jen_Vargas BRONZE, COVERT, Michigan
1 article 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the Power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."~Jimi Hendrix

I like this poem a lot. Sounds deep. lol (:

Julianna410 said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 7:44 pm
Wait did you call a vampire the w*%&e of the hills or is she just literally a prostitute? Other than that good poem.

Biknod said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 12:43 pm
Biknod, Haymarket, Virginia
0 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon; even if you miss you'll fall among the stars."

It's a great poem! Comment on some of mine??

jusc44 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 12:36 pm
jusc44 BRONZE, Ankeny, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
you only have one life, live it

Really good! check out my poem 'Our Love' Thanks

on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:36 am
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
You have the power to live another Childhood, so open up the door leaving back your doubts.

This poem is interesting though the scheme I believe is slightly off, you speak of a beast but she sounds as a vampire, but please read some of mine and comment

on Jan. 14 2012 at 5:53 pm
joshua santiago BRONZE, Bronx, New York
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i agree beauty is the beast ... but the beast is the odd number in the problem .

on Jan. 7 2012 at 3:06 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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Check out my poem 'On our Own'

on Jan. 4 2012 at 11:51 am
His_Baby_Girl19 SILVER, Charlestown, Indiana
8 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your only young once, but you can be immature a life time."

I love this poem. Represents that not all beauty comes from the outside. Even the ugliest things have beauty it al comes within. Yours comes from your heart. We can tell with the way this amazing piece of work is written. I hope to enjoy more of your work

on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:30 pm
J-Bone PLATINUM, Kanab, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"I want you to be forever strong on the feild so you can be forever strong off of it."

-coach Larry Gelwix

cool. I like it. :)

on Dec. 31 2011 at 11:25 am
fictitious-quandary GOLD, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Knowing is not enough; we must apply.
Willing is not enough; we must do.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

"Whether you think you can or you think you can't, you're right"
- Henry Ford

Great poem and congrats on getting in the mag! :)

on Dec. 31 2011 at 9:27 am
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

This is good, but it needs work. Would you mind checking out my work? Thanks!

on Dec. 31 2011 at 2:46 am
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

I love the idea behind it but it seems choppy and incomplete.

on Dec. 27 2011 at 9:50 pm
notquitehoplessramantic BRONZE, Hollywood, California
4 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Maybe... maybe i like being imperfect.

I love the idea and the title... the first line is perfect but the rest needs a little polishing. Overeall nice work.

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on Dec. 27 2011 at 3:02 pm
vazenitran98, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I had the blues because I had no shoes until upon the street,I met a man who had no feet."

It was quite fascinating...the title drew me to this and I was quite surprised by the verses I've read.

Esraa BRONZE said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:03 pm
Esraa BRONZE, Bronx, New York
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very well said and everyone is beautiful on the inside and outside!

Fia-fia BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:44 pm
Fia-fia BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
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COOL! and very well written!! thank you!


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