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Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Anon said...
Jun. 4, 2009 at 5:49 pm:
beautifully written, one might think of darkness, such a life must be lived amoung the shadows of others existence.Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder...what do you see?
 
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Tamara*Monta said...
May 18, 2009 at 7:57 pm:
Twilight did not even cross my mind when i read this. I love this cause it is dark and misterious. Great title. If you want go check out mine!!!
 
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lily C. said...
May 16, 2009 at 11:21 pm:
I love vampires. Great poem. Really paints a great picture
 
Johnneisha L. replied...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 2:17 pm :
me 2 vampires rok
 
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LikeBam! said...
May 14, 2009 at 1:53 am:
who is she? a vampire? well i love it cause it makes me think
 
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Alik_=) said...
May 13, 2009 at 9:28 pm:
I really liked this! good job! could you read mine and help me with them? I definitely need the help
 
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Ni Hao said...
May 13, 2009 at 5:15 pm:
ebony mean
 
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Tristin A. said...
May 13, 2009 at 4:07 pm:
wow this is veryyyyy good!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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renmarie1593 said...
May 13, 2009 at 2:40 pm:
This is really good!
I love the feeling behind it.
and let me take a wild guess....
vampire?
lol.
 
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cassie Y. said...
Apr. 21, 2009 at 9:38 pm:
i love this poem...its so...
abstract, but so understandable and real at the same time.
 
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Mr.Knightley said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 11:41 pm:
I really hope you weren't thinking of Twilight when you wrote this, because it would take away from this poem bigtime. The title attracted me from the first, and what you wrote was done cleverly and truthfully. Beauty only goes so far...
 
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cassandra E. said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 3:27 am:
AWESOME!
 
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cross-i'd-leopard said...
Apr. 19, 2009 at 1:12 am:
I like how it portrayed several themes in it Not to go for looks alone, looks can be decieving... that was really good! U should write more along those lines.
 
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Mikaela P. said...
Apr. 18, 2009 at 9:43 pm:
That was so amazing I loved it. Keep writing!!!!!!
 
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TissaB said...
Apr. 13, 2009 at 11:46 pm:
keep on keepin on it rocked it rocked hard!!! keep it up!
 
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meredith P. said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 10:27 pm:
holy crud!!!!that was amazingly amazing!!!!
 
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dot.! said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 2:32 pm:
really good really deep i loved it!!!!
can you please tell me what you think of my work too??
its TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped
thanks!!
 
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babaa1 said...
Apr. 9, 2009 at 1:36 am:
OO mm gee that was soo deep!
i think u r very good!! how vivid and deep closly in all around u thats just so awsome keep righting!lol
 
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Maxine R. said...
Apr. 8, 2009 at 5:32 pm:
Amazing! =]
 
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Rachel W. said...
Apr. 5, 2009 at 3:59 am:
it's very unique
 
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