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Beauty is the Beast MAG

By Anonymous

Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands



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on Oct. 9 2010 at 12:29 pm
AdrianGraceNunez BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"You Dont Have A Life If You Dont Have A Purpose"

Impact Of Feeling In This Poem. Very Good

CynthiaM GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2010 at 12:45 pm
CynthiaM GOLD, Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"If violence doesn't solve anything then why would you encourage it with war"

sounds like a vampire to me lol

on Oct. 1 2010 at 8:26 pm
jesus_lover98 SILVER, Millington, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
you have to get through the storm to see the rainbow :)

what exactly are you talking about???

on Sep. 25 2010 at 11:25 pm
DaydreamBeliever GOLD, Lockport, Other
15 articles 4 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you live to be one hundred, I want to live to be one hundred minus one day, so that I'll never have to live without you. -Winnie the Pooh

haha this made me think of megan fox in 'jennifer's body'.

on Sep. 25 2010 at 6:38 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

This piece has such a dark and eerie feel and the title fits it perfectly. ;)

VictoriaE GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 4:44 pm
VictoriaE GOLD, Goodyear, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"I know who I am. I don't need suggestions on who I should be."

Perfect. That's all I have to say.

on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:36 am
midnightsnack224, Neptune, New Jersey
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Very descriptive! Great use of vocabulary too :)

on Sep. 3 2010 at 6:14 pm
taylorleigh17 SILVER, Pleasantville, Pennsylvania
6 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something set it free. If it comes back it was meant to be.

Awesome Poem:)

on Aug. 29 2010 at 9:47 pm
spiritualrevelationrevealspainandrevolution PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
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this is a perfect poem to go to "one daay women will all become monsters" by chiodos

on Aug. 25 2010 at 11:08 am
SuicidalDreamer.. PLATINUM, Marshall, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Drop The World....." Or "Everything Happens For A Reason....." Or "I am jealous of every woman that has ever hugged him, Cause for that mere second. They held my entire world."

OMG! This is my favorite poem...You are truly talented and very creative...Keep writing....Oh and if people dont mind would you guys check out some of my work and comment them....Whether it be good or bad....Thank you :)

on Aug. 23 2010 at 11:47 am
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

Amazing, this is one of my favorite!

By the way, would someone look at some of my stories, rate, and critisize? I'd appreciate it.


on Aug. 12 2010 at 12:59 pm
Marzipan_City BRONZE, Rockford, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee - Muhammad Ali

this is amazing work. keep it up!

lamelola GOLD said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 12:10 am
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
14 articles 19 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
The problem is, you think you have time.

Great Work.!!

on Aug. 2 2010 at 7:57 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

nice work. I like how behind the poem it is saying " Beauty lies from within"

ELM522 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:04 am
ELM522 DIAMOND, Selden, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"All those other girls, well they're beautiful, but would they write a song for you?"-"Hey Stephen" by Taylor Swift

This  is  very  well-written, except it's a  story more  than  you're  expressing  feeling's.  That's  okay,  but I  feel  poetry  is  about   expression.

callmemeli said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 10:49 pm
callmemeli, Denville, New Jersey
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you are very talented; im stunned!

on Jul. 17 2010 at 12:57 pm
Shadow913 SILVER, Hinckley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember what they say. 'There's no shortcut to a dream. It's all blood and sweat, and life is what you manage in between."' -Lyrics from "October" by Broken Bells

This is wonderful. You have a great vocabulary and an amazing way with words, which I think is a lot of what makes this poem so fantastic. Good, creative title that draws the reader in...Good work. Keep writing.

Binte SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 3:16 am
Binte SILVER, -, Other
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this is amazing!

on Jul. 11 2010 at 10:57 am
yes_i_am SILVER, Faizabad, Other
6 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"not all those who wander are lost"

la belle dame sans merci...

on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:29 am
Tayy♥ PLATINUM, Winchester, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Forget your past live in the present and plan for the future

This is amazing ! I love your writtings ! I could NEVER write like you !