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Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Abagaile said...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 7:13 pm

i love this poem its dark

 

 
V.O.T.P said...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 7:29 am
This is a wonderful poem
 
foxbox said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 8:08 pm
I love this poem, its so beautifully dark
 
The_Delusional_Philosopher said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 9:29 am
Well, thank you for making me aware of the dangers of love affairs. I'll be sure to take some extra precautions before I go on a date
 
Natalie_T said...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 10:27 pm
This is so well written and powerful!
 
RedRosePoet said...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 9:30 pm
This is really good! read the one i wrote called we were just friends? :) 
 
IsayAnything said...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 10:17 am
Very good. Like the description.
 
ISoMe said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 8:42 pm
I have to say this poem is indeed amazing. It paints a very vivid image. Although it may not be about vampires it suggest that through the extremely descriptive words. This gives the peom a mysterious effect causing an increase to one's enjoyment.
 
LauraAshley said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 1:53 pm
This is beautifully written...
 
Afra- said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 1:43 am
The poem is wickedly lovley. So dark. <3
 
TwinDemons said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 10:37 pm
Wonderful and exciting, loved it!!!!
 
SB248 said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 1:49 pm
This is amazing. You are an amazing writer keep going! 
 
babybird said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 1:47 pm

wow!! that was amazing! i like ur imagery

would you check out my poems (when they actually get posted!)

 
chubbybubby123 said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 11:33 am
wow! What an amazing poem!! I love the detail in this poem!! Keep writing poems!!!!!!!!
 
ThAtGuRl said...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 8:54 pm
jst wow i cant even xplain how wonderfull your piece of writtin is
 
Swifty said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 5:42 pm
this is some poem. the word choice creates a picture in my mind. wonderfully done
 
kitkat95 said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 4:12 pm
wow that was really good and greepy
 
foreverpoetryguy said...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 8:06 pm
Wow... that's all I can say
 
freetotheworld1 said...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 9:18 pm
Dude, this is awesome! Perfectly describes my ex, haha. I love it man.
 
K_Dawg101 said...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 3:09 pm
Wow, i really think your a great writer. Keep up the good work:)
 
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