Beauty is the Beast

i thought was going to be about how the world is so obsessed with appearances

enjoyed it alot 

I enjoyed this poem, very decriptive and helped me paint a mental picture in my mind.... looking forward to reading more of your pieces

Very descriptive and it was good in that it created very vivid imagery in my mind. However I need to comment on the fact that, although wonderfully descriptive, it drifts from context here and there. You made a reference to her skin "butter-cream" by day but by night she is translucent. Are you saying that this woman is a wonderful person and beautiful by day but at night turns ugly? The reference to a change between night and day could be rewritten so as not to confuse, because to me ... (more »)

Very good:) Absolutely loved it!

 

I think your imagery is fantastic. the theme and tone of the poem is very well thought out and i think your use of beauty is a very good idea. i enjoyed your poem because it brought a negative light to beauty and turned the tables in a way. well done.

I really love this poem, but to me it's a little confusing. Still loved the imagry though.

How did this  get so much hype. Omg

Beauty is tyhe beast, Great topic!!! That topic relates to so many people in life. Many people are pretty on the outside but really ugly on the inside. They have a nasty personality and they attitude is awful. I love this poem!!! Great job.

Thank you! Your potry skills are absolutely amazing!

Wow, this is liek my dream come true. I always had a theory that beauty was a beast, and I even drew a picture of it :3 This is like the stuff from my imagination printed on paper

I really like the thought invocing poems up here. 

This sounds so much like one of the ones I wrote! Great job!

Awesome work!!! Keep it up! Check out mine!

This poem is really good and has a lot of meaning because it is so true; also gives a lot of imagery and flows real well

Wow! Great imagery in this poem!

love this poem!! :) very creative !!

Very beautiful! Wonderful use of prose. Painted a lovely image.

I like this poem a lot. Sounds deep. lol (:

Wait did you call a vampire the w*%&e of the hills or is she just literally a prostitute? Other than that good poem.

It's a great poem! Comment on some of mine??

Really good! check out my poem 'Our Love' Thanks

This poem is interesting though the scheme I believe is slightly off, you speak of a beast but she sounds as a vampire, but please read some of mine and comment

i agree beauty is the beast ... but the beast is the odd number in the problem .

Check out my poem 'On our Own'

I love this poem. Represents that not all beauty comes from the outside. Even the ugliest things have beauty it al comes within. Yours comes from your heart. We can tell with the way this amazing piece of work is written. I hope to enjoy more of your work

cool. I like it. :)

Great poem and congrats on getting in the mag! :)

This is good, but it needs work. Would you mind checking out my work? Thanks!

I love the idea behind it but it seems choppy and incomplete.

I love the idea and the title... the first line is perfect but the rest needs a little polishing. Overeall nice work.

It was quite fascinating...the title drew me to this and I was quite surprised by the verses I've read.

very well said and everyone is beautiful on the inside and outside!

COOL! and very well written!! thank you!

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VERY cool! I liked this poem a lot! Feel free to check out some of my writings some time. Keep up the good work!

Your idea is great, but overall it seems unpolished and choppy.

This is like the classic idea of the lethal siren, exquisite in every conceivable way but evil to the core.  Check out my free verse "Reality's shroud" if you get the chance, thanks!

This is amazing! it really paints a perfect picture and its so descriptive in its own way. Truly amazing!

Oh WOW!!!

This is amazing, so rich and full of substance. Just beautiful, it's in my favorites :)

Hope I can get some feedback on my writing pieces, Butterflies and Falling!

"She is the deciever, the harlot of the hills"

Omigosh, that was beautiful in so many ways. I love how you could put so much emotion into such a short piece.

Beautiful writing!!! Great job.

Your words you used made it just beautiful.

I admire your descriptions of the girl. I loved this! Continue wriiting =]

Love it.The way you use words is amazing you are a very gifted writer.

 

This is superb :)

You should post this on a Twilight site also.  Nice poem.

Very Delicious! Beautifully written, and yes the title is the eye catcher. all in all a very great poem. i congratulate you, you seem to be a very gifted writer.