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Beauty is the Beast MAG
Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands
© Anonymous
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ijwspo said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 9:06 am
very interesting
Amila is #1 said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 7:55 am
I am sorry to interrupt but Glenn is totally right, it doesn't flow well and doesn't have a good message. I am totally against 4evr :), stupid name
Hamburglar said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 3:28 pm
I agree. It's a bad format.
Hamburglar said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 3:24 pm
To be honest, I doubt that's the case. I'm pretty sure if that was the author's intentions, it would be a lot more obvious.
All in all, my verdict is that it's simply choppy.
All in all, my verdict is that it's simply choppy.
KassidyLeigh GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 9:26 am
I believe that the author was trying to display the rough and tough and raggedness of the beast with some rough flow, counteracted by the beautiful writing and poetry form
KassidyLeigh GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 9:24 am
This is really amazing. I love how you capture the picture of a beauty with a few words, and then intertwine that with the beast! amazing!
AlmostCassidy GOLD said...
on Feb. 7 2010 at 4:12 pm
Hey thats Great Just Great I Love it Just AMAZING!!
Please Check my work out....Help me get my work talked about plz i would just love it plz help
Please Check my work out....Help me get my work talked about plz i would just love it plz help
4evr :) said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:30 pm
i disagree!!! it was a totally awesome poem!!! :)
Hamburglar said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 4:42 pm
It doesn't flow well. Sorry, it just seems like a string of disconnected thoughts. Good description, but perhaps you should put it into a different format. It has a nice message, but it should really present itself better and read better in your head.
Other than that, okay.
Keep the flow in mind. If it doesn't sound good when you read it in your head, the flow needs to be tinkered.
Other than that, okay.
Keep the flow in mind. If it doesn't sound good when you read it in your head, the flow needs to be tinkered.
deathspeaker said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 9:03 pm
Impressive. Very, very impressive. I wish i could convey to you how great this is... but, since i can't, keep writing!
lemonygirl97 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:06 pm
Beautiful!
CountryGothic GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 6:36 am
I like this, such detailed descriptions.
bubblestlm91 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 12:47 pm
ok, tinkerbubbles or whatever, i seriosly think you need to rethink your chioce of words. i liked this poem and thats my opinion but really was it that inportant to say that this was some of the worst writing ever?
writing_sucks187 said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 8:52 pm
i bet shes a twighlit fangirl
Yousmell-likealoser BRONZE said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 4:45 pm
Well written :)
lov~n th LORD!!!<3 said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 1:18 pm
Touching. Bending of the senses. Truly Remarkable.
