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The Color of Crying MAG
December 14, 2008
Dim and dark
on sunken wings
the melting glow
of tears on skin
and dint of pressure
grasping spare
and turning raw
those gaping eyes
stinging the sight
of what is right in front of us.
© Adeline N., Ridgefield, CT
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This article has 227 comments.
I love it dear. It has its own.. personal charm, let's say?
The title is what caught my eye. "The Color of Crying" very unique and its quite attetion grabbing if I do say so myself. Wonderful word usage. I love it. Nothing more to be said. :) I'll look forward to hear more from you.
-Porsha C.
The title is what caught my eye. "The Color of Crying" very unique and its quite attetion grabbing if I do say so myself. Wonderful word usage. I love it. Nothing more to be said. :) I'll look forward to hear more from you.
-Porsha C.
alayapoetgirl said...
on Mar. 26 2009 at 7:30 pm
Wow. It's brief and straight to the point but makes so much sense at the same time.
writingsavedmylife SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2009 at 12:52 am
Writing about a situation that everyone can relate to in some way is the sign of a real poet. I loved this. Such a perfect description. Just wow.
kidnapINcolor GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2009 at 12:15 pm
Instead of sit here and tell you about how this poem has affected me and how crying is so easy to relate with, I'll tell you that this was a small work of genius. I can relate to it, and so can many other people, and that's what makes a great author or poet. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
emogurl63092 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 18 2009 at 6:48 pm
I really really liked this!
Darkened said...
on Mar. 16 2009 at 4:10 pm
Im not really a crier though i might do me good to cry once in awhile but if i cried every time i was hurt surly i'd always be crying.Though i like this poem because its interesting i cant related. Still good work.
lexikeys247 SILVER said...
on Mar. 15 2009 at 5:30 am
i loved this!
whatwehavelost said...
on Mar. 14 2009 at 8:26 pm
i read alot of poetry but i really like yours.i relate to it, i have been going through time and cry alot
i enjoy knowing im not the only one
your comment was really cool and your right
i enjoy knowing im not the only one
your comment was really cool and your right
Kitti-Chan PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 7 2009 at 11:28 pm
Love it so so true!!
twilightprincess SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2009 at 6:45 pm
Love it, and its very very true!
WHOiNEED2B BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2009 at 8:37 pm
I love your poem. As of today I can relate to this.
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2009 at 8:21 pm
woah, youre good!
jomoziss said...
on Mar. 5 2009 at 5:09 pm
I really related to this. Your talented. :) nice work.
kissingdawn331 SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2009 at 8:27 pm
luv it! I luv the title i agree with IGetIt
KennisLora GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2009 at 12:46 am
the only part I didn't like was "and dint of pressure"
-is that supposed to be hint?
otherwise loved it.
-is that supposed to be hint?
otherwise loved it.
