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Fudge Sundae

August 13, 2014
By Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
Clary_Fray DIAMOND, Castro Valley, California
50 articles 13 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of the mind

Chocolate hair

turned caramel by chemicals

Vanilla skin

turned fudgy by sunlight

Hazelnut eyes
placed behind spun sugar frames

Maraschino lips
turned raspberry sherbet by time

I guess you could call my guy

a fudge sundae.

The author's comments:
I think if I were the reader the lack of punctuation would bother me a lot. As the writer, I intend a message to be put forth with the lack of punctuation. If you have a guess comment it. I'd love to see how readers interpret this.

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