Close | Teen Ink

Close

July 18, 2014
By lynnny BRONZE, Vernon, Connecticut
lynnny BRONZE, Vernon, Connecticut
4 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Two freckles on the back of your neck
Sit quietly in my gaze –
My pen goes slack on my notebook when I
Catch their immobile dance.

Glancing into their shy world behind your right ear,
I see how close they are – almost touching –
And I feel a tug in my hand, feel my finger
Wanting to trace a brief line, to gently connect them.

Desperately close and strictly set apart,
I know that if they had hands, they’d
Be stretched out towards each other.
Foolish, I call myself, when I catch myself

Envying those two freckles on the back of your neck
For being so close to you.


The author's comments:
Each day of sophomore year, I sat behind my crush in English Class because of the alphabetical order of our last names. I had a view of the back of his head for 9 months, and one day I caught myself being jealous of these freckles on his neck because they basically taunted me every day. I wrote this poem a few months ago when I remembered my silly jealousy.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 1 comment.


on Jul. 22 2014 at 4:47 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn
You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

I love how this is worded. It makes so much sence that you would feel that way.