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Catch me

July 9, 2014
By Letterstojuliet GOLD, Bremerton, Washington
Letterstojuliet GOLD, Bremerton, Washington
13 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm in love with you, and I'm not in the business of denying myself the simple pleasure of saying true things. I'm in love with you, and I know that love is just a shout into the void, and that oblivion is inevitable, and that we're all doomed and that there will come a day when all our labor has been returned to dust, and I know the sun will swallow the only earth we'll ever have, and I am in love with you" - The fault in our stars


Before i fall to fast kiss me quick but make it last so i can see how badly this will hurt me when you say goodbye. I now see that it will kill me. Your touch makes me melt. Your kiss makes the world stop. So when you truely say goodbye my world will spin out of control and then what will i do. They say dont wear your heart on your sleve. I keep mine is safe locked and protected by ten foot walls. There are always the people who manage to climb it though. You were one of them. How could i be so nieve to just have people be able to climb it and take my heart. This isnt fun anymore GIVE IT BACK! I just want to be happy on my own. BUT NOONE WILL LET ME! Stop. stop stop stop stop . STOP! Do not go anyfurther. I want you to drop my heart and climb your butt back over that wall your not wanted here. AND AS FOR YOU CUPID. STOP SHOOTING ME WHEN YOU CLEARLY ARE NO HELP! YOU SEE ME FALL TIME AND TIME AGAIN AND JUST LET ME HIT THE GROUND. Ok im sorry for shouting cupid. And im sorry for shouting at him..but cupid you need to take it easy on those arrows when it comes to me. And he needs to understand how fragile i am. Oh forget. If this is love please don't break me
I'm giving up so just catch me


The author's comments:
I got in a fight with the guy i like were both very fragile and have been hurt by others..and this is my out come..

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on Aug. 18 2014 at 10:50 am
Lysander PLATINUM, Bangalore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I slay.

Am a guy but I sure do luv dis poem

AmericaniumJ said...
on Jul. 14 2014 at 10:35 pm
AmericaniumJ, Eureka, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Though she be but little, she is fierce!
-Shakespeare

I love this!

on Jul. 14 2014 at 10:01 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

When I first saw this long unstopping words, like word after word i did think that's a poem realy! But once I read it I said to myself :" This person has the potential to write!" You may need some arrages so it can really look like a poem for ex: the Rhyme may be? But other than that you have the talent to chose the right words to say and that is what every poet desperately needs. So keep up the great work and i'm sure that you'll get better day by day ^_^ I'll keep an eye on you though to see more of your work ;)

on Jul. 14 2014 at 10:00 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

This is beautiful, poetic, and sooo relatable, and I LOVE it. Could you read my poem "Pirates & Cads; A Ballad of The Seven Seas"? Thank you, and please keep writing, you're amazing at it! XD