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Custer's Last Stand This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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Estranged kaleidoscope,
unseemly customs,
between brazen earth-molting sky,
uncontemporary temptress lends pleasant friction,
of modernized ambassadors
whose resolution is brass,
of nature-bred gladiators
whose resolve dyes red,
moccasin-led massacre,
marrow and metal remains,
slaughter surrendered legacy,
yours,
esteemed general.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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rainfall said...
May 4, 2011 at 12:30 pm

i think this is good

but remember big words dont always make poems good

 
Varon said...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 11:12 am
I am stunned at the beauty and flow of this piece even though I didn't understand it.
 
Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:03 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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razorzRpainful said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 3:50 pm
amazing wow
what a brain u have
i am not smart enouh to put something
like that on paper♥
 
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