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Rainy Day...^_^

June 22, 2014
By TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson


I looked up high above.
Saw the blue sky fading to grey.
Paid attention, listened to the wind blowing.
Whispering to me:"Would You DARE?"
Caught a rain drop on my hand.
Felt it falling on my face.
Took a deep breath.
Felt the wind's fresh smell go into my lungs.
Like washing them from any dirt.
"Freedom!" I felt it filling my soul.
It drew a large smile on my face ^__^
"Would you dare go out and get wet?!"
No hesitation: "Yes, I would!"
Spinning around.
Jumping in a puddle.
And laughing out loud "LOL" while getting wet under the rain...
It's just the greatest feeling I've ever had!
It's a Rainy Day Simply ^_^
So come on out eveybody!
For once in a while.
Forget all about the crowd and judgement.
Just go out, GET WET and have FUN!
Especially Thank the Lord above for this precious gift.
Pray God to keep this year as beautiful as this day.
Full of laughter, joy and success.


The author's comments:
I must love RAIN! LOL I don't think there's good enough words to say how feel standing under the rain, do you?! ^_^

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on Oct. 22 2014 at 1:52 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Thank you I really appreciate your opinion ^_^ It means a lot to me

on Oct. 22 2014 at 1:47 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Great! I'm so happy to know that ^_^ Thank you ;)

on Oct. 20 2014 at 7:20 pm
mtkk98 PLATINUM, Lyons, Georgia
21 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
1 Corinthians 13:13


And now these three remain: faith, hope, and love. But the greatest of these is love.

Don't have to worry about that. it's still a working progress but I'm getting there ;)

on Oct. 20 2014 at 2:31 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Thank you!! I so appreciate and enjoy your comment ^_^ I'll surely keep it up as long as you do your thing too ;)

on Oct. 17 2014 at 12:59 pm
mtkk98 PLATINUM, Lyons, Georgia
21 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
1 Corinthians 13:13


And now these three remain: faith, hope, and love. But the greatest of these is love.

Wow! I absolutly love it !!! Keep at it; some of the best I've read so far!

on Aug. 21 2014 at 1:06 am
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 351 comments
YOU ARE WELCOMEEEEE  and dido!

on Aug. 20 2014 at 2:09 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

LOL :P Thank you sweetie for your belief in me.It really means a lot to me ^_^

on Aug. 20 2014 at 12:25 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 351 comments
keep it up til you reach the sky! :-)

on Aug. 20 2014 at 8:22 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Thank you I'll make sure to keep it up ;)

on Aug. 19 2014 at 1:16 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 351 comments
NICE!!!!!!!!!!! this is realy good...keep up the good work ;-)

on Aug. 15 2014 at 9:32 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

yeah exactly what i mean to say here ^_^ thanks for pionting that out

on Aug. 15 2014 at 9:10 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

I love rain too.Only when it's within it's limits.LOL. The many things it protrays and the many things it brings to memory is just wonderful.

on Jul. 17 2014 at 1:01 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Thanks I really appreciate that ^_^

on Jul. 15 2014 at 8:59 pm
Kaydie PLATINUM, Uyo, Other
23 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are all these ideas about what is perfect and what is beautifu land what is smart,but the most appealing thing is,that which is me is nobody else"







-Jennifer Lopez

Wow......rain has a way of giving d soul peace...congrats comet

on Jul. 12 2014 at 12:58 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Yes! I'm not the only one! I love the rain! Ever since I was a litle kid in the Philippines! So good, TheComet! Keep on! ^_^ thanks for sharing this!

on Jul. 9 2014 at 12:29 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Yup I guess so ^_^ lol I love rain too. But i'm so so happy to know that my poems have such a power! I'm so glad to know that you and anyone who read them liked my work, cuz after all that's all we're looking for, let people hear what our hearts are saying cuz I always say that Poems are The Heart's Lyrics. Thank you so much for supporting my work :)

on Jul. 8 2014 at 7:59 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

So I guess great minds think alike, 'cuz I adore the rain hahah! But really, this poem is great! The writing, the flow, all of it! You put into words how rainy days are not sad or bad, but a joyus gift. Keep writin' honey-darlin'!

on Jul. 1 2014 at 10:53 pm
Gabrielleamar GOLD, New York, New York
11 articles 16 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Le vent se lève il faut tanter de vivre" –Paul Valèry

This is a really great poem that is very original, regarding rain as something that nourishes and sustains rather than depresses and weighs down. Well done! I love it!

on Jun. 30 2014 at 12:33 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

I love Rain toooooooooooo!!!! lol I love the energy you put into this poem!!! XD

on Jun. 27 2014 at 6:10 pm
Miss_Orange SILVER, Makati, Other
6 articles 0 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm OK, I'm Fine and I'm alright are the greatest lies people tell each other everyday." By Me.

I like this! it makes me feel like a child who waits optimistically for the rain to pour down so I can play! nice imagery, I can even smell the rain!


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